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By : sesshabattousai

From sangohoushi on January 07, 2009
dude.....
CHIBI Sango is worried about kakashi-san....she demands that you make kakashi better!!...please...?

please update soon...dont make kurenai so worried....and iruka....dude he's gonna be so bad if he loses kakashi...

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
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From Achillona77 on January 06, 2009
they're at war...

Kashi needed to address that awful event with rai! going into a combat situation, he needs people he can trust at his back. it still hurts, but had they not spoken, it would've become a major distraction at a very critical moment. their personal relationship is by no means repaired, but the 'professional' one is, and kashi missed his adviser. they'd been friends for years and rai was almost slain by that whore~ by poison meant for kashi. good men died, and having almost lost both rai and ruka to a conspiracy...well that gave kashi pause ... if he truly wanted rai dead~

HE'D BE DEAD!

period end of story!

it's a beginning to them healing...and as you can see, kashi transferred his wrath to kabuto, but rai got the message.

as for iruka being upset... kabuto would've raped him and had him whoring as a pleasure slave...a child saved by his scar. so it's a fitting fate for that bastard.
so... no, it's not too soon!
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From Prism0467 on January 05, 2009
LOL, Kabuto the fuck-towel. That is some jacked-up Karma.
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From satterb on January 05, 2009
Yay! I'm so glad Rai and Kakashi worked things out. I had almost forgot that they hadn't talked to each other since before the attack from the pleasure slave that almost killed Rai...and Kakashi is making sure Kabuto gets his isn't he...hahaha. I'm not sure I really want to know what all has been happening to him.
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From mizukiruhoh on January 05, 2009
I don't like Kabuto but if Iruka knew what Kakashi had done to Kabuto, especially after suffering something similar tohis fate, I don't think Iruka would react well. As much as I love the friendship between Raidou and kakashi, I'm not sure this chapter was very believeable. A friend rapes a friend, can one honestly forgive such an action? I don't know. I think it would take an extraordinary person to forgive such a terrible thing, especially between soldiers. Trust is a very important part of a soldier's day to day life in the military. If they can't trust one of their team they wont go into battle with them. I guess in one part you have it right, kakashi still trusts Raidou but at the same time how can he? When that friend took advantage of his trust? Anyway, I think I'm starting to talk myself into circles. Another good chapter and it does show a bond bteween Kakashi and Raidou but Ithink its still rather early for things to go back to normal. But still a good story and a good read. I look forward to your next update. :D
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From mizukiruhoh on January 05, 2009
awwwwww, so sweet. :D
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From satterb on January 05, 2009
Really sweet update! I laughed at the thought of the baby pulling Asumas beard. Thanks for the update.
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From Achillona77 on January 04, 2009
Once again, you've outdone yourself! magnificent!

~anz~

ps: HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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From sangohoushi on January 04, 2009
this is one of the best stories ive read....CHIBI Sango loves sessha-san! however, 'tsugi-san found a small typo...u called genma a scribe and so sango was confused... and yes... sango has 3 personalities and is speaking in the thrid person.... but thats another story

that was hot!! please continue!!

*CHIBI Sango gives cookies as bribe*
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From ReixDragon on January 04, 2009
Awww, so cute. Loved how close they got. but why is iruka afraid of kakashi? Is it just what his mind told him when he was poisoned? Holy hell. The gen and Raidou part was smokin' hot. purrrr. After kakashi, Iruka and on the right day Itachi, Genma is my fav man. He's just so hot!!! And Genma and Raidou are just so good together. He's so pretty, raidou's so tough. Keep on keeping on. This story is great and i'm glad that i don't have to worry if they'll end up together anymore.
Cheers
Meg
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From satterb on January 04, 2009
Oh my lord!!! Genma makes an excellent seme. That was some of the sexiest shit I've read in a long time. Beautiful! Kakashi and Iruka are just too sad...please do something before my heart breaks.
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From on January 02, 2009
It's about time I finally give you the credit you so rightfully deserve. I've been so busy lately with school and stuff that I haven't updated in a very long time, but you've updated within two days since I've been reading this. I am so in love with this story, and I love the way you've developed the characters exactly as they would in the Ninjaverse. I'm glad there's finally someone to write an excellent AU that actually fits the characters personalities. I, for one, hate reviewing, being such a lazy person (lol), but I thought you had to know exactly how much I love this story, and the way it's coming along. Eh, I'm actually on break from school, and the blocks don't allow for me to get on here once I go back, so if it's not too much trouble, could you send me copies of each chapter? I'd totally love you forever! (email is sesshy_is_hot@hotmail.com) Thank you so much! Keep up the lovely works.
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From satterb on January 02, 2009
Oh gosh...I almost forgot about those two! It's good to see someone is getting some! I hope you finish that love scene in the next update...please pretty please?
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From RyuEarth on January 02, 2009
lol gotta love genma! XD
Thanks for the update! ^^
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From ReixDragon on January 02, 2009
Hey Sesshy! Good chapters. Really awesome stuff. Loved pregnant kurenai! I feel that if a woman is giving birth she should make her man feel completely inferior by her strength. Oh and she should also be violent and curse a blue streak. but for kurenai that was perfect. I was worried for a bit that Kakashi was pushing iruka to fast but he was a good boy so he gets a star for not being stupid. Will Iruka go with him? That's very soon for him to take off and he's got his new lands and stuff to deal with. Not that I don't want him to go. Great stuff. Can't wait for more, as always!
Cheers
Meg
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