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Reviews for Warlord

By : sesshabattousai
  • From RyuEarth on December 08, 2008
    No! Bad Raidou! He doesn't realize how much Genma likes him (I hope) and how much he's going to hurt Genma for thinking such things! I hope that Genma doesn't get hurt by Raidou's lust for Kakashi! T_T
    But I loved the way Iruka couched Kakashi into having sex with him, that was kind of cute! XD
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on December 08, 2008
    Normally I'd say, what crap about having sex so soon after being raped, but I can see how in a situation such as this Iruka might have become a bit desensitized to the whole thing. What I do wonder about though is the physical. Has enough time passed for having sex with Kakashi to not be impossible or extremely painful with the damage that being gangraped caused? I'd gotten the impression that only a day or two had passed.
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  • From Achillona77 on December 08, 2008
    as always excellent! what will become of our intrepid warlord? he loses his temper and virginity on the same day!

    but the question is... what is to become of General Raidou? apparently he has feelings for Kashi... I have a bad feeling he's gonna bear strong hate for that slave... er ... scribe. It's obvious he desires Kashi.... wants him bad! So how far will he go to have him... ? betrayal? murder? and then there's the question of ibiki's handlers... they really won't be pleased...

    but a spy is a spy...
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on December 08, 2008
    Ch. 9 and 10 was soo hot!!!
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 08, 2008
    rai is a bit touchy isn't he. what's with that? i hope in time he falls for genma.


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  • From suzannecmc on December 07, 2008
    Thank you:) this one is a little different.
    I read it straight through!

    I have to tell you that I feel you have the right flavor for
    Kakashi as a military man in charge. It is a very precarious
    position. Such a balancing game between leadership with loyalty
    and respect, and leadership with fear. Next to impossible to be
    a leader and a friend.

    You have such a sweet blossoming love for our heros, but it is
    a politcal time bomb. Looking forward to how you work it out!

    PS - I loved Kakashi ripping out a hart!!!
    ( this univers's version of chidori!)
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 07, 2008
    A new fic yahoo!! have i been gone that long?!! (but then again you are a super updater ^_^)

    i've read from the first chapter. i love how this fic is shaping up ^_^ . poor poor 'ruka. does he still not remember what happened to him? kakashi killed ibiki in a real gruesome manner it kinda made me queasy lol. oh and the rai kashi crush i really cute. i hope rai doesn't lay out his feeling to get hurt. genrai is totally cool too, i hope something develops there.
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  • From sangohoushi on December 07, 2008
    omg that was excellent!!! who would have thought that a naive kakashi could work out so well...ur a genius!!! but i do wonder how that awkward conversation will turn out....poor raidou..... and genma uke?..... just....wow lol
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  • From RyuEarth on December 07, 2008
    Poor Genma! I wonder if he even got off? (and ironically the ending was my favorite part) ^^;
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From satterb on December 07, 2008
    Yay! Another great update! Thank you for updating so quickly. I can't wait to see what comes next.
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  • From mizukiruhoh on December 07, 2008
    poor Raidou. :D

    conversation awkwardness, oh yeah. LOL

    I just don't like seeing him as a common bully. He's got class. :D But I do understand sometimes muses, stories, are weird that way. They'll totally write themselves! :D

    Its a gr8 story. Its good that you bring such depth & awareness to Iruka and Kakashi and even Genma and Raidou.

    Iruka does need his freedom but he also needs to get his self respect back. Without it no one will take him seriously. Iruka needs justice so he can truly move on with his life and become who he was meant to be. His greedy family needs to be brought to justice. :D

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  • From mizukiruhoh on December 07, 2008
    usually i Like Ibiki. I adore him. He's an awesome manly man. In this fic, he went from misguided to treasonous. I didn't like that. But i love this story. And i look forward to further chapters. :D
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  • From sangohoushi on December 06, 2008
    omg i freakin love this story... this is really good... more please *gives out cookies as a bribe*
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  • From Leeana69 on December 06, 2008
    ......O.o

    Woah, I'd just like to take this opportunity to say....I'LL NEVER GO AGAINST KAKASHI. I LIKE MY HEART WHERE IT IS. XO
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  • From Leeana69 on December 06, 2008
    I can't wait to see what Kakashi does to Ibiki when he finds him. >:3
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