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Reviews for Deception, Love, and Assassination

By : Raelyn
  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on April 21, 2009
    This story is so great:) I can't wait you to update:) But what I really don't understand is why would Sasuke join some special guards to watch of Naruto's family and Naruto himself when he was sent to kill him and destroy them. (And also because Sasuke really cares about his family not some other family). Well, if it is Sasuke at the end. And why did you put this obstacle with a baby? That can be resolved really easily with some artificial insemination or some other technique. This is after all Naruto universe where is everything possible...

    And I will say once again story is awesome:)
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  • From goodchaos on February 02, 2009
    I wonder how they'll get back together? OoO I Hope they get back together! ;_;
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  • From Sessygirl on January 15, 2009
    I have been meaning to read this for a while now. I read your Mpreg and liked your style of writing, so I knew that I would probably like this as well... Sure enough, I love this fic. So far it seems rather tragic, yet extremely intriguing.

    I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon.

    -Akiru-
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  • From beyondanime on January 15, 2009
    This is one of the better fanfictions that I have read on AFF, and I've read quite a few. ^^ Your plot is fantastic, your writing style is exceptional, and your characters are simply loveable and easy to sympathize with. I will continue to follow this with anticipation! Good job and thank you for sharing this with us!
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  • From saxis on January 12, 2009
    Awesome! I love it!
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  • From tszuke on January 12, 2009
    Stupid, stupid Sasuke. BUT THERE MY FAMILY!!!!!! (Rolls eyes) Idiot. Sniff, poor Naruto!!! Why does Naruto have to love such an idiotic self-centered bastard? WHY!?!? My favorite line though is when Naruto is telling Sasuke that the Uchiha will cease to exist. Muhahahahaha!!!!!^^ I love this line!!!!^^
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  • From ANON - shishio_Not_Logged_in on January 12, 2009
    Sasuke isn't dead, is he?

    Either way, awesome story! I love how you pick the perfect moments to have cliff hangers. ^^
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  • From ANON - Michiru on January 12, 2009
    OMG, I'm loving this!! I haven't visited adultfanfiction.net in AGES and now I have a reason to do so!! Can't wait for the next update! :D
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  • From MichiyoInue on January 11, 2009
    Ok now I'm a little pissy. No naruto baby's PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! it just makes it all so wrong. on so many levels. specially if it is a known character. I really love this story and check for updates daily, but that just makes me a little angry. He should know hes not dead because there is no proof, and in all reality sasuke shouldn't be able to stay away from him anyway... Please reconsider!!!!!!! I love this story way to much to have to muddle through something like that.
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  • From Dream2010 on January 11, 2009
    This story is very well written. The plot was interesting and you're a very good writer. I absolutely love how you described each character, and the interaction among them. Naruto will see Sasuke again, when he was in danger one of these day. And how smart Minato was to use Sasuke's love to Naruto and devotion to his clan to make him his pawn.

    About a seperate prelogue,I can just imagine how interesting that would be - Sasuke's seduction and being charmed away and Naruto's pursuit of him.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on January 11, 2009
    ACK! I CRIED when Naruto was forced to have an heir, when he thinks Sasuke is dead. So Sasuke is going to be a silent guardian now? Interesting. I'm starting to really...really...hate Minato right now.

    Love the plot as usual. I truly haven't read an exciting story such as this in a LONG time.

    Please please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on January 11, 2009
    It seems very fitting that Sasuke would join the elite group of guards for Naruto's family, that was a nice touch. Thank you for posting.
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  • From ANON - arniegrape on January 11, 2009
    I truly like your story but if I will have to read a het in it then I will have to stop. Please find a way for naruto to have an heir (if that is truly necessary) without him having to sleep with anyone else (i.e. artificial insemination, etc.). I always read these stories where they put it as necessary for a child and I have always thought it a betrayal of this "true love" between Sasuke and Naruto. No matter how you slice it, if you pledge your love to someone then no matter what you should never cheapen it by being with someone else, regardless of the reason.
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  • From missbri88 on January 11, 2009
    interesting. I just read chps 1-4 earlier today so it was nice to see an update right after. lol. I dont know what to say, but you have a fan reading and wanting more.
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  • From on January 11, 2009
    I have hope that Sasuke is alive thanks to that last part! I hope I'm right! After all, Minato didn't exactly state that he was dead. But now things are all complicated. Buuuh. Thank you for the quick updates! They make my days.
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