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Reviews for Dirty Little Secret

By : gingermaya
  • From Gwenn on December 08, 2008
    I really like this story, so sad yet beautiful. It's well written and I like the way you describe the characters'emotions.
    I look forward to reading more ^^
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  • From ANON - mmartini on December 08, 2008
    I like the experiment: What if Kakashi loses his sharingan and agility? How will he react? Its interesting, and I think so far you catch the line. The characters are so human, vulnerable. Its great. Goog starting point, good plot:) And one more thing I really appreciate that you update often, Im full of expectation every day:) So thank you im waiting the next chapter.
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  • From satterb on December 07, 2008
    Gai's words were beautiful...Your writing is so damned entertaining. Looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From Kipling on December 05, 2008
    HOLY SHIT WOW.
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  • From Vesca on December 05, 2008
    Okay, now I'm really liking this story after the last few chapters. you're making it so very dark and realistic to what would be the very real possibility of the destruction after ... well, after the destruction. Keep up the dark and lovely work! And feel free to torture Pain some more...
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  • From satterb on December 05, 2008
    Oh my God! That was really suprising. Please keep up the great work. I love your writing. Your characters are really well developed. I can't even begin to guess where you are going with this which makes it really fun to read. Thanks again for a great update.
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  • From ANON - Stinky Horowitz on December 05, 2008
    "...a decommissioned weapon is destroyed, so as not to take up space and valuable resources for the newer, working models."

    That gave me the shivers. Outright shivers. I never thought about it that way before, but it makes so much sense. Reminds me of Kakashi's wry look when he says to Naruto over Zabuza's grave that shinobi are tools.

    I love this story, by the way. In case you couldn't tell.
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  • From satterb on December 04, 2008
    Just want you to know that I love this story. It's dark and angsty, but not that whiney, cry in your green tea crap that we see so much of. Poor Kakashi, somehow I don't think Naruto will be as optimistic about Kakashi working at the academy...that's just the vibe I got...I could be wrong though. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Stinky Horowitz on December 03, 2008
    Argh! Kakashi did his best, but I know he won't see it that way. I wondered how many of the attackers he killed; I guess if I were Tenzou I'd be looking for ways to convince Kakashi that he'd done his share of the fighting.

    It was smart to make Naruto and Kyuubi one entity; compassion from the Hokage is less likely and makes Kakashi's emotional pattern believable because his feelings of worthlessness are reinforced by an authority figure.
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  • From Ainsel on November 30, 2008
    This story is so sad .. But it's really wonderful
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  • From ANON - Stinky Horowitz on November 28, 2008
    I've always thought that the worst torture for Kakashi would be what he'd do to himself. I'm enjoying your writing immensely. Thanks for the update.
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  • From polaris on November 27, 2008
    so sad,but BEATIFUL!
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  • From ANON - Stinky Horowitz on November 26, 2008
    I'm impressed with the AU you set up so quickly. I can definitely see it all in my mind; Kakashi's characterization and the logic behind his actions fit well within this world. I'm very curious to see where you go from here.
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