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Reviews for Price of Cheating

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Jarick on November 06, 2014
    Loved it! I honestly believe this is one of the more accurate interpretations of Sasuke, so good job! Oh! And you have me wondering what the hell happened to Naruto's parents in this story...>.>
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  • From HalfFallenAingyl on May 29, 2011
    Aw!! I'm rather sad that this thing seems to only be a two-shot :(
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  • From bloodshound on September 15, 2010
    woah...nasty. Still, he deserves it. Stupid prick
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  • From Dorkchic on April 14, 2010
    I love this story! I really wish it would continue though. It would be awesome if it picked up several months down the road when Naruto has managed to put his life back together and has gotten back on his feet. That way Itachi could take a shot without worrying that he was just a rebound or a substitute for Sasuke and Naruto could emotionally ready enough to try again with someone who is smart enough to realize what they have and hold onto it with both hands. There would of course be some friction with Sasuke, but he had a chance and blew it. It would be even better if Itachi took Ino's suggestion and had the grandkids the his parents so desperately want with Naruto through a surrogate.

    I am honestly surprized that Sasuke never even considered alternate methods (such as a surrogate) before deciding to cheat. Or do his parents no know that he is gay? You had said that Naruto charmed their parents, but you also said that Sasuke and Naruto were friends for years and I just did not know if that was how the parents thought of him.
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  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on December 15, 2009
    I loved it and i wish there was more its realy late and i gots to go to the bed but if your fans oppinion counts your story is one i actually want to read and look forward to seeing more of lol nighty night
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  • From NarutoVixin on September 12, 2009
    "swift kick to the car" now thats one way to put it thank you so much you have made the last few hours brighter lol and i plan to keep an eye out for the next chapter and also looking over anything else you have posted couse hun your good
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  • From ANON - dustin on May 04, 2009
    nice. gotta say, it makes me think of that saying, 'payback's a bitch'. and the way you wrote it made me smile. maybe you should write another chapter.
    ah, well.
    Ja ne!
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  • From Svirfnebli on April 16, 2009
    KYAAA Thank You! I like your story! I LOVE your story!
    This was the first time i read about "Ruka-Tenzou" pair, and it was sweet. I like it :)
    Naru and Itachi...they're my favourite XD
    Pleas more & more
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  • From KatrinaCarter on March 18, 2009
    *laughs* that was perfect!

    I hope that you show a bit more of how Sasuke reacts to Ino's breaking it off, and if Naruto will end up with Itachi.

    *hugs* I love it! Hope you update soon!
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  • From missbri88 on March 17, 2009
    OMG! I like it. its funny and angsty, and cute, and I soooo wanna see more! (FYI the song titles are awesome!)
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  • From ANON - CFear on March 16, 2009
    I really like your story expecially the song 'before he cheats' ^_^ please continue it's good.
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  • From ANON - k on March 16, 2009
    He deserves that. Finally something where Sasuke actually get what's coming to him.

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  • From ANON - a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h. on March 16, 2009
    I love it! More, more, more!!! *picks ego up and feeds with warm brownies* *cuddles*
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  • From monrque on March 16, 2009
    this is so much more than i hoped for.
    It looks like there will be more to go Yes?
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  • From butterflies1974 on March 16, 2009
    All I can say is give me more, please feed the reader monster. :) I really liked the story and boy can I relate on how being cheated on feels and it is one of the most unforgiveable sins someone can do to another person. Thank you for the time and effort it took to write the story can't wait to read more.
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