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Reviews for Price of Cheating

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Rose on November 10, 2008
    Wow. Just wow. I feel bad for the car but it was a necassary sacrifice. I'm not so sure you should make this into a multi-chaptered mega story, but I would love to see Sasuke's reaction, both to the car, but more importantly, the realization of what he messed up and has lost. I admit i'm a sucker for a Sasuke that realizes how horribly he's fucked up. Whatever you decide to do with this, it definitely needs some sort of closure piece, Sasuke finding the car, reading the letter, or just Naruto finding his way to a new home and life. If you do decide to leave it as it is, I still think that would work, but I am the kind of person that likes all doors being shut at the end of a story. Whatever you do, I do like your work and am happy you've posted another story.
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  • From LadyLaran on November 10, 2008
    Easy answer there, TW....MORE MORE MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - YaoiFan!! on November 10, 2008
    HAHAHAHA!! Thou Shalt Not Cheat!

    I wouldn't mind a sequel with Naruto/Itachi :-).
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  • From ANON - Jeanna23 on November 10, 2008
    Please please please continue. I want to read about Sasuke's reaction.
    I also want to see Itachi & Naruto together.

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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on November 10, 2008
    Oh that was so good :D I want to see that ass's reaction to. You know, I think you should continue it but if you don't it does make a good one shot.
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  • From DetoxAngel on November 10, 2008
    I would really love to see his reaction to that...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2008
    you HAVE to continue!
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  • From Stormraven on November 10, 2008
    Oh please, make it a series? Wonderfully written and love the plot.
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  • From Shaylilin on November 10, 2008
    I think this is fantastic.
    I would love to read more if that's where the story goes.

    I like that Itachi just sits and watches, though I'd probably have done the same thing.
    I really want to see Sasuke's reaction though.
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  • From ANON - eviltwinofgaara on November 10, 2008
    AWESOME! Please continue this story...I can't wait to read more. It kept me enthralled through the entire chapter. Hell, I let my lunch get cold cause I couldn't pull away.
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  • From ANON - More Than I Appear on November 10, 2008
    Ah, that was an amusing read!I loved the orange permanent ink bit- nice touch- but how come no one inside the house came out to investigate the noise once Naruto began laying into the car's glass? I think you could leave this as a one shot or make it into a multichapter story. Good story!
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  • From ItaNarulover on November 10, 2008
    For the love of god, please continue! Please, for all the (hopefully, if this really is the pairing) ItaNaru-lovers out there!
    This fic is original eventhough it has some events that are usual. Like Sasuke marrying someone else to continue his line for example.
    Anyway, it's awesome and I kept snickering while reading this. I really like how you portrayed the characters.
    So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on November 10, 2008
    CONTINUE! It would be really cool if you continued this fic. I want to know what
    Sasuke's reaction will be and if Naruto and Itachi develop a relationship.

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