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By : anlaaria
  • From TheSimi on December 04, 2008
    Excellent chapter! It was really nice to learn more about Naruto and Sasuke's history and why things are the way they are. Will our boys be able to mend their relationship or has too many things happened?

    Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Meikyuu on December 04, 2008
    *sniffles* that was touching. I was confused by the prior chapter, but this latest chapter tied a lot of the loose knots and made sense of most of the plot. Please note that confusing readers is not always a bad thing! I kept coming back mainly because I wanted to figure out what was going on.

    I love your Sasuke! I like your Naruto, but really your portrayal of the Uchiha family--especially Sasuke--is simply awesome. Nyaaa! I'm so happy that he and Naruto have at least taken the initial steps of fixing their messed up relationship.

    I miss your Gaara... *sniffles again*
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 04, 2008
    Excellent job. The use of the letter of complaint as a main plot device in unexpected way was a wonderful move. I throughly enjoyed this chapter. Please update once more when you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - Seras on December 04, 2008
    OMG this chapter almost made me cry. I love this story, plain and simple. It's so breath-taking and captured me from the very first chapter when it first came out(darn laziness and nothing-to-talk-about-itis). Poor Sasuke.....I'm so glad Naruto went after him. T-T

    I can't wait for you to update, but then again, this is a story worth waiting for, very well written.

    Much love~
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on December 04, 2008
    WOOOW that is just so fucked up. my heart clenched in my chest when i read what naruto wrote on the paper, oh no, i had a feeling. so so sad. i'm glad naruto managed to catch him but there is still so much he needs to explain. still think he was super harsh when sas came to see him after he got out. and why didnt he go see him sooner while sas was talking thru the door?? nervous? what? ooohhh i LOVE this! make haste with the next installment please! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2008
    I love this story, so many things still waiting to be revealed, voyeurism, depth of emotion, family. Thanks for writing!
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  • From audreytiphaine on December 01, 2008
    AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
    how do you expect me to survive like this???
    ok. i'm rational now. well, i gotta hand it to you again : impeccable story-telling, well-crafted plot, and amazingly interpreted characters. although i still prefer Sasuke from Life Before Life After (yeah, i've got a soft spot for the angsty, tortured, cruel son of a bitch).
    I don't think you know how unlikely this is... I DO NOT read AU. i don't. i don't like it. i read yours just because i fucking worship your writing. how sad is that? and you make me like it! argh!
    ok. i think you've got the idea. thanks for writing!!!
    audrey
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  • From ANON - Sailor Kismet on November 30, 2008
    I just read chapters 2-4. Sasuke is so sad to see like that. What happened between them? Is there still a chance for them? I hope so...but the end of that last chapter...Naruto was there the whole time?! Sasuke didn't sound overjoyed to figure that out either. I'll still hope for them though. Thanks for the shout out in chapter 2. Keep up the good work and hopefully I'll see you soon in chapter five. ^_^
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  • From serenagold on November 30, 2008
    :(


    Sasuke is a wreck.
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  • From ANON - Lee on November 30, 2008
    While I'm glad you came out with another chapter, there were a couple misspellings and confusing dialogue that kind of took away the magic of the story. Your previous chapters looked more refined and proof-read in comparison, but I still like the chapter. It seems like you're presenting it in pieces, and while that method keeps the audience in suspense and wanting more, it can get a little confusing and overboard. For about half the chapter I was wondering if I'd missed something in the last because you made references to something that happened in Sasuke and Naruto's past but never elaborated. I'm sure it'll all clear up in the end, but it almost sounded as if you made a mistake rather than making past references on purpose.

    I was also wondering: if Naruto didn't want Sasuke to know he was in the other room, then why'd he send the plant that explicitly said "Namikaze, Inc."? Naruto bolted the door and stuck a chair to make sure Sasuke couldn't get in, but why give away his identity and then lock the door? Did you write that on purpose? I may be considering things too deeply or maybe I really did miss something, but all in all, I like the story and its development, as well as how it's written. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Sigart on November 29, 2008
    You do angsty Sasuke so very well, I'm not sure if I could ever express how very well it is done. (
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 29, 2008
    this is very good, but i have to ask, while Sasuke deliberated, while he deliberated what? I'm so confused, but I love this story, it's so damn sad though. I keep hoping it will be happy soon. Can't wait for more. Slave
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 29, 2008
    Aish. This is really good. Please update once more when you have the chance, this is an excellent story.
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  • From ANON - macy on November 29, 2008
    wow, i didnt expect naruto's reappearance to happen like this. it was sooooo good. i was so excited to read it yet i was trying to read slow so i wouldnt reach the end of the chapter so soon. Haha. Sasuke's relationship with Itachi is awesome. Their Dad is quite amusing too. I looove this to pieces!
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  • From ANON - Fayte on November 28, 2008
    Omg best chapter yet! J-just... I'm totally speachless, you're an amazing writer.
    The way you portray everything is just great, and all the twists and turns in this story just have me wanting more.
    And the Uchiha brother's realationship is just the best
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