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Reviews for How orphan boys playBy : therar |
- From Sheemashelin on November 29, 2008
I still like where this is going but you should slow it down. I don't have tons of room to say that, I get so excited to get the next chapter I rush too. For future times maybe dedicate a chapter to each boy and the situation. ie: Iruka and Naruto could have used a whole lengthy chapter between them. Anyway I'm awaiting the next chapter. Also I like how Sai communicates I giggled at the idea. I look forward to Gaara meeting Gai and Lee. lol!
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- From serenagold on November 28, 2008
tee hee.. so cute. ^^
Keep up the good work!
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- From Sheemashelin on November 24, 2008
I really like where this is going. I seriously hope that you continue this and that I get to be apart of the journey. Please don't get to discouraged if you do not get to many hits and or reviews. Sometimes people are dense when it comes to a good fic! I'm pretty excited for the next chapter. I await your genius.
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- From nekluvshp on November 07, 2008
WOW!!! Awesome!!!!
If you don't continue to write this story, I will hunt you down, kidnap you, and dump you in water infested with Pirahna!!
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