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By : DarthValgaav
  • From Yamizenchou on April 26, 2009
    I had almost forgotten about this story. Out of curiousity, what's a kadaicha? I can't find anything on google and the closest weapon I can think of is the kodaichi or Japanese short sword. It's good to know that you'll upload the sequel. I'd kind of like to see Sasuke at least attempt to challenge Naruto, either cause he wants to prove himself stronger or wants Naruto-san's slaves. I don't really want Sakura to be Naruto's slave, it just seems like something the Uchiha would do. Guy only had 2 really cool people in his family: his ultimate badass brother and his kind, sweet, total MILF of a mom. I'd like to see Naruto *convert* Kin and/or Temari during the chuunin exams and maybe Tayuya at some point. How about Hana and/or Tsume as lovers, if not slaves? They'd probably already have won their freedom but their very good looking and severely undersexed in fanfiction. It seems you might do it regardless, but it'd be rather cool to see Kurenai fall for Naruto as well. And she's already having sex with him so that's between 1/3 and 1/2 of the work done already.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on April 26, 2009
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
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  • From VFSNAKE on April 26, 2009
    YAY! GO NARUTO! SEX ALL AROUND! LOL! I wonder if Naruto will nab Temari or Ino. Or maybe Tenten. LOL! Write more ASAP!
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on February 26, 2009
    Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From UzumakiIno on February 10, 2009
    Excellent work. As for your per-village idea, that's fine by me. (I just want Sakura and Ino to end up happy).
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  • From hoplop89 on February 09, 2009
    plz update
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  • From Zenith010 on February 02, 2009
    Reccomendation,
    Try to add Tayuya as a slave during the "Sasuke Retreival Arc" if you can find a way to do so.
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  • From Belletiger on January 31, 2009
    that's one of the best slave fics I ever read!
    I think Naruto would be good to add Fem Haku, sakura, Sasame and Isaribi into the harem while Shikamaru would have Temari and Tayuya as their slaves.
    Please, update as soon as possible.

    You know, I think I will try to do my first hentai/slave fic. your fic really inspired me.
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  • From wswadling on January 23, 2009
    I think that when sausuke leaves the village Naruto should take sakura as a slave s how about this then Saku-Kin-Temari as well sorry if its against ur taste but i just dont like haku hes a bit weird
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  • From terb8210 on January 21, 2009
    Nice start, here's to hoping that Kiba dosen't try anything, and for the paring desition I say Tayuya, youve done Hinata, Anko, Ino, Temari, Tenten, Haku, Kin, Isaribi, Sasame, and Kyuubi in the forest of lust story, so why don't you try something new (there's also the fact that I like the foul mouthed redhead, she's sexy when in her second level curse seal form, and I think that Hinata could keep the little fire ball in line if naruto captures her)

    Also, your elements are off, it goes Fire beats Wind, Wind beats Lighting, Lighting beats Earth, Earth beats Water, Water beats Fire. Just so you know
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  • From 12snowman on January 19, 2009
    Good story needs to have haku.
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  • From jaxlax21 on January 19, 2009
    decent chapter, i would say to go with the Temari option. All I can say though is that really want to see more romantic situations (not lemons persay) between Naruto and Hinata. I really hope that as this story progresses that Naruto will devote himself to Hinata as his most important 'slave' and all.
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  • From darthme1011 on January 19, 2009
    very nice again
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  • From ZackSamurai on January 19, 2009
    great story so far, as for the vote i say tayuya! honestly i lean towards tayuya and temari added along haku and kin. both of those girls are proud characters so i do hope add them both, but if not i vote for tayuya.
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  • From statnin on January 18, 2009
    Hey
    an awesome fic u have goin there, quite twisted haha
    keep it up :)
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