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By : DarthValgaav
  • From Kingswriter on May 08, 2009
    Not bad... this has a plot while still being sexy as all hell. I think that there seems to be some Sasuke bashing in this... not that I mind.
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  • From VFSNAKE on May 07, 2009
    Awesome! I'm glad Sasuke didn't get what he wanted. Ironically enough he helped Naruto out. I can't wait to find out about Sasuke's punishment. Kick that bastard in the nuts. LOL!
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  • From Jin on May 07, 2009
    Sasuke's already turning out to be a bastard, though it's wasn't that long of a fall.
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  • From PnKnG on May 06, 2009
    @delahozomar:
    You haven't read the disclaimer to chapter 4, have you. I will quote it for you:
    "I know many of you are opposed to slavery and I agree with you. But, being a guy, I still fantasize about it from time to time. So this is the world I have created for them where slavery is accepted mixed with passion and blood. It’s just a story for you to read and enjoy. I promise I won’t do anything too brutal to the characters if it makes you feel any better."
    If you don't like it don't read it. Nobody forces you.

    @Darth Valgaav
    Keep the good work up :D
    Looking forward to Tayuya.
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  • From Pinkney on May 06, 2009
    This story is AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!!

    Hey listen, if you like blood, gore, violence and NAruto being with HOT MK women, then please check out my Naruto/Mortal Kombat story in the threesome section.

    It's called. Naruto: Champion of the Elder Gods. Let me know what you think!
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  • From naruto86 on May 06, 2009
    You should work on another story because personally this story is completely degrading to the Naruto female characters your other story is a lot better and doesn't degrade the female characters so continue your other story please.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on May 06, 2009
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From theimpacientone on May 06, 2009
    it's great
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on May 06, 2009
    You know, I bet even if he got her injected with the stuff, she'd have broke the uchiha.
    Cool chapter, can't wait to see who the new addition will be, and hope it's Sakura, Just so later she can rub it in Sasuke's face that Naruto's better.
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  • From firelordeg on May 06, 2009
    fantastic chapter thank you please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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  • From Yamizenchou on May 06, 2009
    Well, that's about what I expected from Sasuke, particularly in this AU. The only cool Uchiha are his badass brother and Super-MILF mother. The breeding center isn't surprising, though a male can resurrect a bloodline faster than a female (to hell with you feminists; it's a biological fact!). Can't wait to see Forest of Lust's sequel and see who else has joined the harem for this story.
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  • From JubiKnight on May 06, 2009
    I think you should have Naruto get Kin and Tayuya in addition to Haku and Hinata, and if possible Yugito as well. I've got no preference for Temari way or the other, so I say just give her to Shikamaru. (You don't need to do a lemon with them though.)
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  • From 12snowman on May 06, 2009
    great stuff
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  • From DragonMan220 on May 06, 2009
    Nice chapter. I love how happy Haku is with Naruto and Hinata. I want to see Sasuke and Sakura punished big time!
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  • From theimpacientone on May 05, 2009
    love the story! but I was wondering why just Kin or Tayuya if there are more females on oto (or more specially rice) for example like karin or sasame or even Guren (though the last two are from fillers) and what about the rest of the countries that have ninja like star village, or snow country
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