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Reviews for Slave for you

By : DarthValgaav
  • From theimpacientone on November 05, 2009
    it's good to see you again! but you left a lot open with hint! (is it Sasame? I hope so!)anyways, I hope you update soon.
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  • From Yamizenchou on November 05, 2009
    I'm bettin on Sasame, with Isaribi as a close second
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  • From hippie420 on November 05, 2009
    keep the story coming can't wait to read more see how the new girl is.
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  • From DaBerrila on November 05, 2009
    pure genius, keep it up. Just don't wait so long between updates again,thought you quit writing
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  • From LoneWriter on October 17, 2009
    This is by far one of my favorite stories, kudos to you man... I hope you update soon the whole slave thing had me hooked. I would love to see some anal and also some punishment (light bondage, spanking) things of that sort nothing to extreme.
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  • From nm1716 on September 17, 2009
    I love the story. I hope you start updating ti again. Hope to be able to read some more soon!!
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  • From havoc795 on September 06, 2009
    all I have to say is, please, PLEASE continue. I love the story so far and Im dieing to know what happens next. keep up the great work
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  • From VFSNAKE on August 30, 2009
    I had an idea for the next chapter. Have Naruto choose Sasuke's punishment and have the punishment be to spend a single day with Anko as HER slave. LOL! Just a thought. Also, I look forward to you updating your other fic. PLEASE DO!
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  • From fayt098 on August 23, 2009
    i just read the 5 chapters you had up and i washed you put up more. and if you don't mind me saying so the guy how say naruto has too much girls is just crazy. i mean for one naruto has been treated like crap and i beat he's been rape when he was a kid. two alot of the girls naruto meet had the same life as him (though i think naruto has had it worse then anyone). and three naruto is the only one how can fill that viod in there heart and his so the guys a idoit to say naruto has too many (i can't tell you how many times i wish naruto was a heram and with his shadow clone jutsu i bet he can please anyones and look at negi, he's only ten and he has 31 girl in love with him (give or take a few)thats also why negima is my favorite anime and manga and fanfiction. so how come its wrong to let naruto have so many girls.) anyways i getting off track. i think isuribi should be with naruto since because of her life. but i think hanabi and tenten is good for naruto to and you know what they say "sometimes sister think alike" (not to meanteni always like the to of them) and i also thing the princess that naruto meet decerve him and so does yakumo. really i can't decide, you can pick for me. anyways i think your doing a great job. can't wait for more
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  • From Takai153 on June 14, 2009
    Great fic, man!! I love the premise! It reminds me of Pokegirls. If you don't know what pokegirls are, go to angelfire.com/mn3/pokegirls/main.html. In fact, you said in chapter one, something about a story involving Hinata, Kin, and Tayuya as cat girls. Using the idea of pokegirls, would be a great way to do it. I also love the girls Naruto is being paired with. Hinata and Tayuya are my two favorite girls to pair with Naruto, I like Haku, and Kin is very rarely used, and I like rare pairings (another plus for Haku). You're lemons are pretty good too, but I would like for them to be longer. In my opinion, lemons can never be long enough!! I can't wait to see who the other person you've decided to add to Naruto's harem is! Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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  • From BrenTenkage on June 14, 2009
    hey lets have Temari get raped and fucked, and KAnkuro uses a bunch of Sex based tools to take on Hinita. Also great story, I really enjoy it
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  • From alkanphel on June 08, 2009
    Great story. pretty cute and sweet for a slave story, but this definetly makes it a winner. can't wait to see who he ends up with next
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  • From goldband on May 31, 2009
    love it keep it going
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  • From bigdog21 on May 30, 2009
    hey i am a big fan of this story and i want to read more can not wait to see next chapter.
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  • From blackrose03 on May 11, 2009
    really i love the idea of this work and support it.
    i see it going for atleast 12 chapters till the time skip with Tsunade, hinata, tayuya(my fav), temari(second fav), and kin. haku just feels like a stretch
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