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By : DarthValgaav
  • From garsdal on March 26, 2010
    wonderful, its been a long time since i checked this story, and imagine how pleased i was when it was updated!
    a filler girl you say.... there has been a lot of those.
    yakumo kurama? Toki-hime? isaribi? sasame fuma? haruha-hime? let us know soon, please?
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  • From zamrok55 on March 11, 2010
    I really like this one too. but i have a question: when do you update?
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on December 30, 2009
    Great update, and my guess is...Isaribi.


    Here's Hoping.
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  • From KateConnors on November 29, 2009
    Hey just finished the last released part^^

    And I love the plot, and well I wanted to ask if you could make a parall story about the other pairings like sasusaku, or inoxchoji, I was getting curious after I read sasuke wasn´t so good after all and stuff. So I really would enjoy a story like that^^

    and anyways just wanted to say that it was a really good idea to let haku train wind and water nature, smart move^^

    so think about the idea looking forward for the story to continue hugz Kate^^
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  • From LuisMason on November 28, 2009
    you should give him Tayuya from sound and Yugito from cloud shes the 2 tail contaner
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  • From Astridmp on November 25, 2009
    Allright let's see, where to start... Must atmid I'm a bit disapoited in you: Where's all the other girls in the class... you only had to come up with names for them, but ok: might have been a bit confusing if every boy had started out wiht one or two slaves.
    Female Haku and Hinata works fine for Naruto and you works their personality wery well.
    As for adding more girls to Naruto's 'colection': slow down there aré other guys in that village, and I'd love to see this story from different views.
    Could you let Rock Lee challenge Sasuke for Sakura? We Both know he would win. Or maybe just have her taken from him as ponishment (you know for what) then i'd give her to Shino (finds his bugs quite facinating)
    An epic battle between Sasuke and Naruto over Hinata and/or Haku would be great.
    I suppose I should end my comment by saying that slavery is just wrong. (But that dosn't mat this story less hot)
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  • From Takai153 on November 24, 2009
    Great chapter. Loved both lemons, but espacially Hinata and Naruto's first time with anal. Looking forward to more of that. Can't wait to see who the next girl is! Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can.
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  • From BrenTenkage on November 18, 2009
    glad to see you updated, nice
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  • From anish1304 on November 15, 2009
    great story.
    Waiting too hear from you soon
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  • From nocontact on November 09, 2009
    For some reason, the way you describe the slave requirements for the exams reminds me of badges in Pokemon...

    ..::(-)::..
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  • From nocontact on November 09, 2009
    Weird world...

    ..::(-)::..
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  • From wiper on November 08, 2009
    thanks for new chapter, i was waiting .o)
    i realy like new ideas in sex like anal .o)

    now i will wait how will girls interact and new AU girl .o)
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  • From raex18 on November 06, 2009
    Good story so far. I hope Temari is going to be in this?
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on November 06, 2009
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
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  • From VFSNAKE on November 06, 2009
    Nice! Naruto laid twice! Keep it up.
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