Click Here!

Reviews for Slave for you

By : DarthValgaav
  • From diadem15 on May 11, 2010
    Good Chapter, I can't wait for Tayuya to enter.
    Report Review

  • From Takai153 on May 11, 2010
    Yay, you updated. And a nice chapter too. I liked the food sex, though I prefer dessert personally. Cake frosting is my favorite. I can't wait to seeing Isaribi's initiation.;) Hey, since she's aquatic, maybe you could do a hot-sping or bath scene with her. I'm also curious what you're going to do with her. She didn't strike me as much of a combatant, so what will her role be?

    But the fight was too short. I get that action isn't the main focus of the story, but could you maybe try to flush out the next fights more.

    Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
    Report Review

  • From kitsune360 on May 10, 2010
    awesome story, i wish there more writers like you
    Report Review

  • From garsdal on May 08, 2010
    a good way to bring her into the game, the the pounding of the dog-breathed nin was to short and far from brutal enough
    Report Review

  • From wiper on May 08, 2010
    thanx for this new chapter .o) will be waiting for more .o)
    Report Review

  • From theimpacientone on May 05, 2010
    didn't see that one coming, a bit sad it wasn't sasame, thouhg it makes up with thefact that breakfast was really hot
    Report Review

  • From DragonMan220 on May 05, 2010
    Nice breakfast for Naruto, very well done. I can't wait to see how Isaribi takes to her new master and slave sisters.
    Report Review

  • From DFoarile on May 05, 2010
    I'm really interested in your story.

    Can I ask you a question? Do you think that you will mind if I use ideas from your story in a new Naruto story idea that I'm forming?

    It involves Naruto getting a powerful and mysterious summoning contract for Nagas in which he gains a powerful hypnosis dojutsu Kekkai Genkai when he is a little boy. I want this version of Naruto's world to have a similiar 'slave system' through kunoichi can start out as slave or free depending on when they enter the academy. Like if you are a civilian, it depends on how you do on some 'early tests', but if you are part of a ninja clan, it depends on what the clan head says.

    For Hinata, her father, Hiashi, puts her into the 'slave system'.

    There are also rules of honor within clans which will bound on OC female Uchiha named Sayu to a certain blond haired hero.

    So, what do you say?

    By the way, your story is really good and I hope that you continue it soon!

    Later and best wishes!
    Report Review

  • From ravenmoonshadow on May 05, 2010
    so nice to see this updated your works are one of the few that keep me digginf thru the muck here
    Report Review

  • From rowinr on May 05, 2010
    Not a bad fight but the chapter was kinda short granted its been awile so anything was appreciated so i look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
    Report Review

  • From VFSNAKE on May 04, 2010
    YEAH! GO NARUTO! Got laid and now has a new girl. Kiba should get a nice kick in the balls for his actions by Naruto.
    Report Review

  • From GhostwriterMO on May 04, 2010
    Yeah that was a short fight but Kiba isn't known for being the brightest pup in the kennel and thankfully Isaribi couldn't get used as a weapon in the fight. Isaribi is now in Narutos's slaves eh, cool! Naruto and his girls will treat her right. I wonder how he's going to get Tayuya? It's great to see you writing again and can't wait for more.
    Report Review

  • From firelordeg on May 04, 2010
    thank you for sharing another great chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
    Report Review

  • From magic713 on May 04, 2010
    nice update. It's good that Naruto now has another slave that he can treat better than her previous master. I hope to see another update soon. :)
    Report Review

  • From wrathchylde on May 04, 2010
    I was happy to see this story again. I love most of your smut fics here and I love the premise behind this one. Forest of lust was one of the first ones I forced myself past my love of NaruSaku to enjoy. Keep it up and let this story flourish.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!