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By : DarthValgaav
  • From starteeth on November 12, 2010
    Nice story, hoping to see it continued soon.
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  • From on August 31, 2010
    Love this story. Definitely looking forward to more. I kinda hope he gets Ten ten next but whatever you do i am sure it will be great. LONGER OR MORE FREQUENT CHAPTERS!!!!(please) Can't wait for more.
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  • From DragonMan220 on August 24, 2010
    Nice chapter, I'm glad Isaribi is happy with her new family. I can't wait to see what other girls Naruto gets with the Chunin Exams coming around.
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  • From cletusdabomb85 on August 23, 2010
    interesting story, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From VFSNAKE on August 23, 2010
    YEAH! GO NARUTO! I bet he kicked Kiba in the balls to win. LOL! You need to do a flashback of that fight and should Naruto kicking Kiba in the balls.
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  • From zaber999 on August 06, 2010
    what other cite are you taking about
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  • From on June 29, 2010
    dude loving this storie can't wait for next update could you send me a message when the next chapter comes out
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  • From ElfenSky on June 01, 2010
    Nice idea, really enjoyed reading it.. Please write more soon :D
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  • From 12snowman on May 26, 2010
    good work hope for more soon
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  • From nocontact on May 23, 2010
    Awesome, you updated! I've been hoping you'd continue this for a while now.

    Not bad a food-sex scene, It's pretty hard to find around here, and I think You pulled it off quite nicely. And I commend you for keeping Naruto's loyalty to Hinata intact, it's fairly common that whenever another girl comes into the picture he just sort of spreads the love around. It's good to see a more realistic version of how another girl would actually affect how he interacts with Hinata.

    Why wouldn't Naruto be allowed to refuse the challenge? It seems like a moronic rule, it would make no sense... But, hey it's your plot device, so I wont gripe about it too much.

    Hope to see more from you soon!

    ..::(-)::..
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  • From AkariTenshi on May 16, 2010
    Please update soon!!
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on May 14, 2010
    Wait, so did Sasuke get in any trouble for the shit he tried to pull? Is he going to have to pay, or lose Sakura or something?
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  • From zaber999 on May 13, 2010
    are their going to be more chapters on this story. It looks like your plan to continue in forest of lust.
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  • From ninesenshi on May 12, 2010
    Glad to see you back on this story. It's not about the fighting so I don't mind a short fight. Hope to see more.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From kiyomos1 on May 12, 2010
    AWSOME dude cant wait till the next chapter!
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