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By : DarthValgaav
  • From SagashiIndustries on January 17, 2009
    Well, that caught me offgaurd. Kurenai gets to do it with him this time, huh? Nice. Looking forward to more. Also, why not just include Tayuya AND Temari?
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  • From VFSNAKE on January 16, 2009
    Very nice! As for voting I say let both be in his harem. Why can't he have both? With his stamina he could have them all.
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  • From darthme1011 on January 16, 2009
    hard choice! haku!
    good chap
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  • From jaxlax21 on January 16, 2009
    That was great, but you need to update this faster. I had been waiting on this for like 3 months haha. Anyway, I vote to incude Temari and not Haku, you know since she is an actual girl and not a boy (I've always hated Fem!Haku). I hope this cntinues stronly and that Hinata will always be the one closest to Naruto.
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  • From Silent Pluto on January 16, 2009
    Haha now this story is sexy! Inventive!
    I love it! You so gotta keep going.
    Kudos!!!
    ^_^
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  • From YoukoTaichou on January 16, 2009
    This fic reminds me of Slyfer101's fics. I'd suggest as flower tattoo tits and pierced tits and clit for Hinata. Also add Yakumo, Isaribi, Fuka and Yugito.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on January 16, 2009
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon.

    Haku
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on January 16, 2009
    HAKU PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD LET IT BE HAKU!!!
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  • From Sarastro on January 16, 2009
    How about both? I mean Hinata, Kin, Tayuya, Haku and Temari are only 5, but incase it's one or the other I prefer Temari
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  • From Chronostorm on January 16, 2009
    oh ya forgot to mention this but what you said about the weakness of the elements is off water is weak against earth and lightning is stong against earth not the other way around
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  • From ShouraiChan on January 16, 2009
    YAY THIS IS BACK!!!!! HUZZAH!!! And as far as slaves...Haku is such a cutie, I'd say do it with Haku, but I also LOVE Temari/Naruto so do Temari!!!!
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  • From Jin on January 15, 2009
    Honestly, if it was only a choice between Haku and Temari, then I would go with Haku. As far as I'm concerned no one needs a kind master more than her. However, I think a better harem would be Haku, Temari, Hinata, and Kin, leaving Tayuya out. I say give her to Shikamaru. The irony of giving him such a troublesome girl is just too good to miss. If anything, it'll help him develope some backbone. Also, that way Naruto gets one kunoichi per village of origin (Leaf, Sand, Sound, and Mist). Sometimes the most important element of a harem is variety.

    Seriously, think about it.
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on January 15, 2009
    I would vote for female Haku. Temari would seem to be a rather forceful girl, and so are Tayuya and Kin, Haku would be a calmer influence, and would probably help Hinata balance it out. And I hope Sasuke losses Sakura to someone, and Ino puts on a few pounds (she's always too thin)
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  • From fenrir7139 on January 15, 2009
    I like the story, man. Please, update more often! I beg you! Plus, why not just include all the Kunoichi you want? More fun all around, heh heh... :P
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  • From Chronostorm on January 15, 2009
    Well that was interesting i look forward to the bondage gear getting used also my vote is for Haku more chemistry for them and if anything i would have Kin taken off your list only need one sound girl i also think you have made Naruto a little naive about the the world as far as slaves go i think he would have know a little more or taught more about given he grew up with there but anyways still good look forward to more and hopefully quicker updates but don't rush
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