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Reviews for The Trick Is Not Minding

By : sesshabattousai
  • From naracest on November 07, 2008
    Oh my freaking god. Soooooooooooo goooooooood! Wow, that was phenomenal. You have real talent. This story is so intense. I'm actually trembling right now. I'm dying for more. I literally will wither and perish if you don't keep going. I'm sorry, i'd like to think that usually my reviews are fairly well thought out but i'm still in so much shock that I can't really for coherent comments or compliments.
    Okay, one little thing and dear god don't take it as an insult because this story has rocked my world so hard that...that...that i can't even come up with a decent metaphor to finish this sentence. I just want to pass on a tip that was passed on to me in my learning curve of writing. When a new person speaks it should be a new paragraph.
    Okay, the complete possessiveness of your OC is brilliant. I also am very fond of the twist on the standard cliche that i myself have fallen prey to where Iruka is the beaten down and abused, fractured and broken character and kakashi swings into save him. I've read a couple of fics that had Iruka as the savior but the authors always made him into a secret anbu or something like that but this was PERFECT! He's still the character we know and love but he's still doing everything to help kakashi. And holy crap, that last chapter was amazing. So hot! So psychological. I'm so glad that kakashi didn't end up hurting Iruka. I have a feeling that when your OC finds them kakashi will eventually pull through his brainwashing and find he's a lot stronger than he ever gave himself credit for. And kick some serious ass i hope.
    pleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoing
    You rock my world.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From RyuEarth on November 07, 2008
    No! That's not fair! T_T
    That is completely not fair and Aoshi has them in his sights! T_T
    Thanks for the update though! =)
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  • From Stacy on November 06, 2008
    this is so great!! the way you take your time with detail is amazing! please keep this story going it's awesome!
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  • From Gwenn on November 06, 2008
    I don't think I like where this is going... Kakashi's supposed to be traumatized and afraid of sex because of his abuse, so I don't think it's really realistic for him to act that way with Iruka. (but that's my opinion)
    Apart from that, I still love your writing style,even if I don't like dominant!kakashi.

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  • From mizukiruhoh on November 05, 2008
    fantastic hot chapter!
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 05, 2008
    i got scared for a moment. i hope kashi learns to deal with his inner demons soon and let iruka love him. i love this story so much.
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  • From RyuEarth on November 05, 2008
    I thought Kakashi left the apartment, but I'm glad that he didn't! ^^
    And this chapter was h o t HOT! XD
    Thanks so much for the update, and I hope that Kakashi can realize that sex doesn't always have to involve pain! =)
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  • From RyuEarth on November 05, 2008
    NO! Stupid Iruka, he's not yours! T_T
    Thanks for the update! I hope that Iruka can find Kakashi before Aoshi does! =/
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  • From yaoihentai69 on November 04, 2008
    -gasp- oh no! I hope Iruka didn't screw things up too badly. T_T And darn you Genma and your big mouth! The suspense is gonna eat at me till the next chapter. I can't wait. X'D You're doing a kick ass job. I absolutely love this!!!!
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  • From mizukiruhoh on November 04, 2008
    Oh Genma! Genma Genma Genma, bad bad Genma! And after you promised not to say a word. What a giant gossip ho! :D
    Poor Iruka,he used the wrong words to comfort his Kashi-kins. Look forward to next chapters. :D
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 04, 2008
    the way genma described kashi was so funny lol, the disdain in his voice was almost tangible lmao.

    Aoshi will get what he deserves(i hope it's death or castration).

    kashi had such a harsh past, nobody wanting him, being all alone. some people really fall into those situations due to those circumstances. but as you put it there is a guardian angel sent just for him and that's Iruka.

    i'm so loving you for the fast updates >.
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  • From LadyLuck87 on November 04, 2008
    please keep updating so fast! i'm totally addicted to this story!
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  • From Gwenn on November 04, 2008
    This chapter was sweet... Stupid Genma! He better not tell anyone what he saw, 'cause if Aoshi hears about it Kakashi will be in a mess ! *scared*
    As always, I'm impatient to read more !
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 04, 2008
    i got scared for a moment i thought Aoshi was was in his apartment. don't scare me like that *_*

    it's cute that iruka got his feelings off his chest. i hope kashi understands them fully and accepts him.
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  • From antilogicgirl on November 04, 2008
    @_@

    Emotional roller-coaster, and exceedingly well done. I've never been one for abuse in a story, but I do understand why you've used it here. Even though I was somewhat reluctant to read, it's turning out to be much more than I'd expected. Thank you very much, and do continue.

    --A
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