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Reviews for The Trick Is Not Minding

By : sesshabattousai
  • From arabuzumaki on November 10, 2008
    that scar kashi has can really cut someones self confidence. he has to see it everytime he looks in the mirror. so sad. if Aoshi wasn't dead i'd suggest you kill him lol. it's so sweet that they accept each other, iruka has waited a long time for this.

    i wonder how kashi would react knowing iruka killed Aoshi? would it push him further into the world of self pity? would he really deem himself weak and worthless knowing that a mere chuunin defeated someone he couldn't stand up to?

    great chapter.
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  • From mizukiruhoh on November 09, 2008
    wonderful retribution! Aoshi deserved it! :D
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  • From serenagold on November 09, 2008
    Oh shit Iruka totally killed Aoshi!!! (Applause!!)


    This is a great story. I've really enjoyed reading it. Actually, I got so caught up in reading this that I'm not late for somewhere I need to be so I'll keep this review short.
    Keep up the great work! ^^
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  • From RyuEarth on November 09, 2008
    Although I'm glad to see that Aoshi could be dead, I wanted Kakashi to do it, to show that he was stronger then Aoshi, and could over power the man =/
    I know that they have alot of problems to work out still, and I'm going to be looking forward to reading them!
    Thanks for the update! ^^
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  • From Gwenn on November 09, 2008
    Yeah go Iruka !! lol. That bastard Aoshi finally got what he deserved ! Poor Kakashi... but Iruka's gonna take good care of him, I'm sure.
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 09, 2008
    yippe Aoshi is dead. i can so hug you :) the bastard deserved it. you had me scared i thought kashi was gonna die :( i heart skipped a beat lol. but i know you won't do that :)

    all in all great chapter. i got what i wanted out of this lol death to Aoshi by sweet little iruka no less. yippee. :) :)
    i hope kashi finds a way to express his feelings to iruka.
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 08, 2008
    it's great that kashi wants to work things out with iruka. but he should at least have said so. i'm awaiting the sunshine after the rain.
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  • From RyuEarth on November 08, 2008
    chapter 13 was sweet and hot, but chapter 14 was sad! But I know that Kakashi is struggling to not become like Aoshi, when he knows that he is T_T
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From Gwenn on November 08, 2008
    Poor Kakashi... I hope Iruka will help him again, because I don't think he can figure what's wrong with himself without help.
    It's all Aoshi's fault ! lol
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  • From BouncyBunny on November 08, 2008
    This last chapter is too abrupt. The way you set it up in the beginning, Kakashi should be shaking in his boots the next time he saw Aoshi. If Kakashi could've just trapped him in the Sharingan, why the hell didn't he do that as a teen? He knew how to use it back then. Maybe the whole "newbie ANBU" kept him from using it, but once he realized that he was deathly afraid, why didn't he just use it?
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 08, 2008
    great chapter. that bastard finally got some of what he deserved. that was a heart breaking vision of iruka being pinned to the wall.

    something is really bothering kashi, what is it? is he scared?
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  • From RyuEarth on November 07, 2008
    OMG! OMG! This is not fair! This isn't a death fic is it??? I hope not! DX
    I hope that you are able to update soon, cause this cliff hanger is just evil!
    And, on a softer note, stupid Aoshi for thinking that Kakashi can't top ^^;;
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 07, 2008
    oh my gosh that bastard!!! i hope he doesn't hurt iruka too much. this fic i really an emotional roller coaster ride. keep it up!!
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  • From Gwenn on November 07, 2008
    You were right, I like this chapter better ^^
    I hope Iruka will kick Aoshi'ass to protect Kakashi ! (even if I don't think he's strong enough to beat an ANBU lol) Both Kakashi and Iruka are in a mess... poor them, I wouldn't want to be in their shoes right now !
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 07, 2008
    things are really getting interesting. does that bastard Aoshi think everyone is like him? i mean ibiki may have THE look but he is so sweet on the inside especially to iruka.

    can't wait for the juicy parts.
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