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Reviews for Afraid of the Dark

By : Jelp
  • From Eremi22 on November 01, 2011
    I'm not sure when this got updated, but I am definitely looking forward to the next update. Whenever it may be.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on November 27, 2010
    geez this is such an awesome story. I love to read & reread your stories. Sasuke & Naruto are just everything to each other and I've loved those kinds of stories ever since I started reading as a kid. Too bad that's rarely seen in the real world.
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on July 02, 2010
    Okay, I'll be honest, given the summery I was putting off reading this, thinking great, another vamp fic.. but OMFREAKINGGODS!.. WOW.... yeah, just wow. I need more... like now, like a crack addict going through withdrawl. lol. I sat down and spent the entire day doing nothing but reading this fic. Please, please tell me you are working on more!!! Okay, I'll be waiting and jonsing... and please don't let anything bad happen to them!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 01, 2010
    OH MY GOSH!!! I love love love this story! After reading chapter 12 I had the song "I'm so excited...and I just can't hide it..." actually running through my head. And FINALLY Naruto puts Sasuke out of his misery in chapter 13. I just LOVE this story! Now I don't want to read anything else because I just want to think about this story. Jelp you are awesome. Thanks sooo much for all the time & effort you put in for readers who love your stories. Seriously...you ever compile your writings into a book I will buy it in a heartbeat. I already troll deviant art looking for pics that fit the image you give in the stories you write. Truly wonderful.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 01, 2010
    I just finished chapters 1-3...and I am so creeped out I had to check the locks and put a blanket on me so my feet aren't open... when I was a kid I couldn't let my feet or hands out from under the covers because of the monsters. And it's summer! It's too hot for a blanket but I don't care...I'm creeped out! (can't wait to read more!)
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  • From ANON - Timber on April 07, 2010
    SWEET!! :) I was so excited to see the latest update!! Happy Dance!! SQUEEL!!! I was like so worried when Sasuke left that they would be pulled apart from hard feelings over how to handle things between them. I was felt so bad for Sasuke and Naruto over the black light....poor Naruto was so excited then upset and Sasuke trying so hard to get him to realize how much he means to him. They have it so rough. I am so worried about the end though with Naruto telling Sasuke to not leave him.....this so has the ear marks of some storm ready to break over their heads!!! OH the WORRIE!!!
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  • From ANON - Taka on April 06, 2010
    OMFG! that was awesome!!!!! omg i think naruto only did it cuz he didnt want to lose sasuke :( i hope that he did it for love too!
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on April 01, 2010
    About time. Took you forever to update.
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  • From serenagold on April 01, 2010
    I'm thinking... "Hot damn!" Heh.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 21, 2010
    Hi! This is an excellent story that you should not abandon! I loved the legend and the magic and all the secrets and skills that boys are yet to discover. And their love. Aw.
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  • From ANON - Timber on March 12, 2010
    Chap. 12

    I really enjoy how this story and the characters are developing. I found the creepy spider thing really CREEPY!!! SHIVER!!! Sends chills up my spine just thinging about something like that. I know spiders are good for killing bugs and flies but is it just me or do they seem to be in larger numbers around the house this year then they normally are?? I don't recall ever seeing as many as I have this year in the house and kinds I've never run across before. UGH.....makes me think the idea of bug spray for spiders just might be a good idea! LOL

    I can't wait to see what happens next!! :)
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  • From ANON - Gitona on February 07, 2010
    This story has me enthralled! Very imaginative. I do hope you update one day. This story is so interesting. Email me if you update.
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  • From Samric on January 16, 2010
    This is amazing! Your ideas and the way you handle the characters are so original that there hasn't been a single dull moment. The minute that I think I've got soemthing figured out--because of what sterotypically happens next--you work your magic and I'm blown away by the new direction.
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  • From ANON - Sneakyfox on January 03, 2010
    Oh my god, Jelp. That Daoshi thing has got to be the scariest concept for a monster I have ever come across. A creepy spider thing that is extra spindly and sneaks down from the ceiling with its webbing while you sleep and pluck out your eyes??!!! Never in all my life have I ever even conceived of a nightmare that terrifying!!!

    If this thing haunts my dreams tonight I swear I will hunt you down and kill you. ((o_o))


    Keep up the good work, you terrible, terrible woman. >:o

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  • From UzumakiLover on January 02, 2010
    Like always a wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what's in store for the boys next. I can't get enough of this story! You've really outdone yourself with this one.
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