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Reviews for Afraid of the Dark

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Fayte on November 15, 2008
    Yay!! Chapter 2! I actually thought that this was going to be a one shot!! Im so glad its not, That would crazy being hurt like that and not feeling paan. I am so glad Ibiki beleived Sasuke! Great chapter I'm off to read the third!
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  • From serenagold on November 15, 2008
    LOL

    "Never ignore that feeling in your gut. Instinct keeps you alive when logic fails. ~ Jelp"

    Each chapter comes with an important moral so that all may profit from its reading. Heh. ^^ Keep up the great work!
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  • From hisoka on November 15, 2008
    itachis got some weird powers.did he alter narutos mind too?and what were mikoto and fukaku talking aobut.if narutos moms in a coma shouldnt he go and see her once in a while?hope you can update soon
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  • From goodluckbadtimes on November 14, 2008
    very interesting chapter!
    i'm so curious right now. my mind hurts so bad just thinking about what his parents were talking about.
    why did Itachi have to make them forget everything? Sheesh it's better for them to know and watch out for themselves
    oh god, you so have to update real real soon pwease!! ^_^
    and i'm totally adding this story to my recomended reading!
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  • From hsosborne on November 10, 2008
    very interesting buildup you got in this fic
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on November 09, 2008
    Oh no! The ending sentences were definitely foreboding and ominous. I'm actually a tad scared! This chapter is a true breath-stealer. I'm wondering what Ibiki's role in all of this is. He doesn't want Sasuke to tell his parents? Weird. Poor Naruto too, I can't believe he got hit my Sasuke's mom!

    The suspense is killing me, please please update soon :)
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  • From hisoka on November 09, 2008
    im pretty shocked that mikoto would hit a child,at first i thouth the first chapter would be the end and sasuke and naruto would be dead.i understand the fears of night and dark when i was little i slept in my brothers room(he had a bunk bed and i liked the top)and afraid of monsters i didnt leave the bed to go to the bathroom,i dont think you could call it an acident because after wards i could only get to sleep thinking how funny it would be if my matress dripped onto my brother.yeah i was an odd child.hope you can update soon
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  • From Kalariona on November 09, 2008
    I'm really enjoying this, I cant wait for the next chapter.
    I had a different opinion about the darkness as a kid. I was never scared of the dark, only the half light. My theory was, if it was dark, then monsters couldn't see you. If you had light on yourself, it was like a spotlight saying, here I am, come and take me.
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  • From goodluckbadtimes on November 08, 2008
    this is an amazing story i'm so hooked!!
    why did Ibiki say for him to keep it a secret?
    i'm really curious to find out what happens next,
    god please update real soon!!!
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  • From Pomona on November 08, 2008
    Ooh, the Uchihas know something about Naruto...or his parents. And how and why can Naruto protect Sasuke, even if he's a survivor and the monsters couldn't have killed him? I've been intrigued by the story from the first chapter, the second one just got me addicted. You write about child's logic so well! I can't recollect how my mind worked when I was six, but I guess it was terribly similar (having a raven and a black yak as imaginary friends and whatnot..)

    Well, have fun writing next chapters! I will be needing some insanity fix, since my Tourism exams are coming.. :)
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  • From Dragon7 on November 08, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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  • From maggiekebs on November 08, 2008
    Poor Naruto, getting hit when he was already hurt. Ibiki is cool as a shrink. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ItaNarulover on November 08, 2008
    Oh, sorry about my confusion earlier. Now, I get it.
    Of course they could still be alive but just bloody, but no, I had to think of it as if they were dead. I'm such a weirdo.. ;P
    Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and I think the fic is really cute as well as original and exciting. So keep up with the good work!
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    Good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From ANON - Lee on November 08, 2008
    I'm very interested in how this story is going to progress and how incubi (or not) will be involed. Sounds like you have the plot mapped out and are stringing the reader along for now. At times I think Sasuke's 6 year-old mind is a little exaggerated, but overall it works. Once again, I'm looking forward to the story's progression, and hope you update soon.
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  • From Digitalkisses on November 08, 2008
    *glomps Jelp* OMG I love this story, how do you always manage to draw me in and get me hooked on your stories?


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