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Reviews for Afraid of the Dark

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Angel on January 10, 2009
    Jelp!!! You won me with Mine :) I've been reading this story on the sly because it is AU and farfetched at that, it was only on your last update that I realised it was you as I obviously discovered Mine after I had started reading this intermittently... I love where it is going now as the first chapter seemed almost like your typical preteen - and then I woke up - type story. How misleading :)

    This last chapter was a chockablock! Informative, purposeful and GRIPPING! I can't believe how much you wove in there... I love the twining of myth and fiction here lol. Dang now I have yet another fic to await updates for with bated breath :) oh and of course am also reading NYNP :)

    Whoo! Counting down the fortnight as of now :)
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  • From ANON - C-chan on January 10, 2009
    This story is AWESOME! And thank you for including the story of Fengshen Yanyi, it helped me out in SO many ways.

    Keep writing please!
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  • From UzumakiLover on January 04, 2009
    Most important, I'm so happy to hear your doing better. If you haven't got your health then you haven't got anything. Second, i never would have seen that coming, what a way to end a chapter I mean its shocking and exciting and I'm dying to see what happens next. I mean come on....plus Itachi, awwwww he comes back right? But I've always been addicted to your story so I'm so excited to see how Sasuke and Naruto take that lil bit of family history! hehehe yay you!
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  • From ANON - Elle on January 04, 2009
    Amazing story, Jelp. Thank you for amazing read. It's a smoothly written, intruiging story that is opened in a style that resembles such authors as Nora Roberts and Jane Austin. The ideas you bring remind me so much of myne own as a child. The thought of going to the washroom quickly to avoid monsters is something I experienced as a child. Sometimes, even now, I believe there are things at my windows in the dark. Even though the characters are very much OOC, it somehow still works with the plot and in my head is all in order. It's facinating. I thank you for this and hope to read more of it soon. Keep updating!
    ~Elle
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  • From hisoka on January 03, 2009
    they were closer than brotherly, and all thanks to a blacklight.cant believe they locked up itahci for trying to save them well he sould be okay.tampered memories like wholey cheese why doesnt naruto remember any of this?hope you can update soon
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  • From dolphina23 on January 03, 2009
    You know, this is probably the most interesting spin on fairies and that particular fantasy world that I have ever seen, not just for Naruto. It reminds me, at times, of Laurrel K. hamilton's Merry Gentry series, but better. I love some of the memory reels in the last chapter. I could see a lot of what was happening to them as I read. I also like the foreshadowing for Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. I almost wish you hadn't used such a huge time jump for them. I'll be looking forward to the next chapters. A quick note on grammar, though. Try not to use so much repetition of your pronouns in the same sentence, especially when you have two subjects there. it gets a little convoluted and awkward. But other than that, a superb showing of fantasy and romance intertwined in a beautiful and original way. I hope it stays this good. I'll be waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - C-chan on January 03, 2009
    Wooo! Fairies! When I read that I SPAZZED! I was all "No wai! Rly! Lulz! (^.^)/" I Love it! I was kinda bummed out over how often Itaichi erased their memories, because they keep healing each other...about that, they only seem to be able to heal one another, and there was that whole Sasuke B-day sequence? Does this mean that they are destined to be fairy lovers? Cause if so, I ABSOLUTELY approve! Make it happen!

    Great...not STELLAR job! I love this story, and how fantastical it is. I truly adore it, and I can not wait for the next chapter!
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  • From DevilLived on January 02, 2009
    Holy shit. That was amazing. You can really write young characters well, can capture that innocence without it seeming silly. I love this plotline, love its twists. OMG. Update soon XD
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  • From ANON - Skogstroll on January 02, 2009
    >:(
    Im not pleased.
    Thanks to your story, Ive stayed up until 3 am! I was gonna go to bed around 1, tops! Now Ill have no sleep at all :
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  • From ANON - Fayte on January 02, 2009
    O..m...g That was amazing!! Sasukes a fairy!!? I love it! Is naruto one two? that was such an intense chapter, I'm so happy you updated! *has fallen head over heals for this story* I can't be;eive they sent Itachi to the mental hospital O.O!
    I can't wait for the next chapter, especially because where you left it was evil
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  • From goodluckbadtimes on January 02, 2009
    Sasuke's a FAIRY?!! is Naruto a fairy too? wow this is just so amazing, it keeps getting better and better! Itachi!! is Itachi okay?
    please you have to update real soon, im seriously in love with this story!
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  • From ANON - Dragon on January 02, 2009
    I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
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  • From Mija on January 02, 2009
    omg where was this fic before NOW? I cant believe I missed this fic...I saw it and thought I heard the title before so I clicked on it and realized I have never read this before, till today...all I can say is WOW! seriously, I LOVE horry/suprernatural/mystery fics and omg this is so well written, lots of little twists and turns and oh my its just wonderful and when I got to the last chaper I was like nooooooooos I want more....and fairies??? I would not have guessed that, but it makes sense, monsters affraid of the light, your plot running along the lines of a bed time story, yet fairy tale...very good and unique and I cant wait for more.....I hope you condition gets better and you feel well, I know how it feels to be sick, and sometimes not even know you are sick lol, its wierd till you start actually feeling better...anyhow thanks for the wonderful read, I cant wait for more...take care of yourself, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From serenagold on January 02, 2009
    Fairies?? o_O >OMG!!
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  • From Onikage on January 02, 2009
    You should watch the movie "They". It's ALOT like this.
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