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Reviews for Afraid of the Dark

By : Jelp
  • From hisoka on January 31, 2009
    those wings seem odd,i see them covered in sorta like flesh yaho vainy and all but i guess thats more masculine and better than the butterfly wings.weres sasukes father still with itachi?what can they do now at school being chased by freaky looking black things(i always imagine they look like those things from kingdom hearts)mikotos stories just make me confused a bit but i guess it helps.hope you can update soon
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  • From on January 30, 2009
    Sasuke and his wings ;) I was hoping someone would put that in one of thier stories soon. Thank goodness it was you, because it FITS!!!!!!
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  • From lexjamandme on January 30, 2009
    OH GOOD LORD!
    And now I feel like an ass... I was just joking about ignoring your fiance... I am so sorry about his aunt.

    God, I feel stupid now.
    So stupid that I want to go hide. It was a unbelieveable chapter. Unbelieveable.
    *runs off to pull my stinky foot from my mouth*
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  • From lexjamandme on January 30, 2009
    I am a bad little fangirl. I hadn't read this before. I don't know, I thought it would be too scary or I don't know...
    But once again you have proven that whatever you write I MUST stop everything and read. Dear god, I love this. LOVE it. I'm on the edge of my seat. As always your writing is phenomenal on every level, characterization, description, intensity... everything.
    I am actually a little angry at myself because although I still have one more chapter to read, you can expect another review then... I kept forgetting to review the previous chapters because I wanted to get to the next... I almost wish I had waited until it was complete because now I'm going to be checking everyday for an update... I might die... and here I thought waiting for updates for "Highs and Low" was going to kill me... oh my god, and "Naruto, You aren't pregnant." Seriously, I apologize to your fiance, but you can't do anything else but write. Sorry... I need you to only sit in front of your computer...
    I'm not above bribing. You tell me and I'll do it.
    Oh, and this line was PRICELESS...

    "The only way Sasuke and Itachi are fairies is if the universe is trying to balance things out by counter-acting all the happy-cutesy-girly-stuff with these two angsty-emo men. There’s no way that they’re fairies."

    LOVED IT.
    Michele
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on January 30, 2009
    Totally getting to the action! I really hope Mikoto is okay :(

    And I'm especially curious as to what happened with the black light.

    Hope you recover as healthy and happy as possible :)
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  • From goodchaos on January 30, 2009
    WOW!! I Love this fic so much! I can't wait for Naruto to remember!
    Sooooo..... I guess the black light has some sort of Bow Chika Bow Wow effect! COOL!
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  • From ANON - Angel on January 30, 2009
    Ouch! Good luck tomorrow with your treatment sweets and thanks for thinking of us minions to post early! The bestest of thoughts your way for a speedy and a successful treatment this time around!

    It's so harrowing reading about the U freaking great genuiuses HA! aka UCHIHA because I have the tendency to second guess every move they make and accept every word they speak with a grain of salt lol. You are building and building tension (shikes, gathering chakra for that rasengan eh! oh my lunacy!) anyhow ... it's frustrating aarrrgghh because I want to know I want to know I want to know NOW!!!

    I loved the interaction between Naruto the contemplative experimenting IDIOT and Sasuke the moody idiotic genius in the room, and lo, what is this with a black light eh and why does the purple keep breaking? Hmmm purple - denotes pending death, royalty, what else, what else, what am I missing here? :)

    Well you don't drop ball on surprises and keeping the momentum going!
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  • From serenagold on January 30, 2009
    One could only imagine what sort of loopy stuff you'd end up writing on pain pills. It could be pure jibberish or quite possibly the most weirdly brilliant thing ever! (Or, more likely, two or three words, followed by a "laihflgbasegjagasasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasa..." and a whole lotta drool! hehe)


    Keep up the great work and good luck with the surgery!
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  • From sonotgoingthere on January 30, 2009
    Another great chapter. I'm really interested in what you conceal and reveal about their pasts together, as if its always been there but always been hidden. I wonder what Naruto's skills will be, and whether the black light caused their trist, or if it was something else.

    Great work at keeping the mystery going.
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  • From on January 26, 2009
    Totalllyyyy wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - gabby on January 20, 2009
    well after readnig 5&6th chapters i was absolutely chought up in your story, it was something incredible, magical, hypnotic that i couldn't take my eyes away from monitor not until last letters of your note at the end of the chapter... i really enjoyed the story, moreover i'll be waiting for your update ^_^. of course i was taken aback when Mikoto took the cat out of the bag XD... it was quite a surprise that Sasuke could be a fairy:D and i think you have done great job by connecting your story with that legend. it perfectly goes together!i am so hooked up on your story now.... thanks for sharing such a masterpiece with us (hug&kiss on the cheek)
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  • From sonotgoingthere on January 18, 2009
    Fantastic story. I really liked the fairy tale - enough of a real old story to be convincing, and tied nicely into the plot for Naruto and Sasuke.


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  • From serenagold on January 12, 2009
    Personally, I love the fairy tale aspect you added into the story. The story of Naruto itself is embedded with so much Japanese myth and lore as it is that its cool to see it given a chinese twist. (I once took a Chinese literature class in college and it was filled with complicated myths like that. ^^ I enjoy seeing all the connections you made.)

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From DevilLived on January 10, 2009
    Wow. That was an intense chapter. Telling such a large history like that in a story can be hard, but you had me (much like Sasuke and Naruto) on the edge of my seat the whole way through. I love how you took a fairy tale and not only spun it with your story, but also a bit canon-ly as well. Amazing.

    Can't wait for the next chapter~
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  • From hisoka on January 10, 2009
    ...i should try to learn some chinese its harder than japanese...the names had me lost, but i got it in the end.id just run around with flashelights all the time and learn to sleep with the lights on.are they afraid of fire?i cant really blame naruto for not believeing but it was a long story.so tsunade and jaraya will be coming soon whats that make orochimaru?cant wait for updates
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