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Reviews for Afraid of the Dark

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Shinigami Twin 04 on August 13, 2009
    YAY!!!! The yaoi is here. Ueber points for NaruSasu and not SasuNaru!!! WOOT!!! ^0^

    But really, you have sucked me in with this plot. Very, very facinating ideas and how it interconnects with the names of characters and all. Cool. I wish I had this kind of creativity... then again, I would be sad that I put it into a fanfic rather than find a way to make it an original story and make some munnies off it like I am Laurell K. Hamilton or something equally awesome. (Or profitable... either way I would be satisfied)

    I think was sucked me in the most, the afraid of the dark thing. yea.... definitely STILL have that problem. And I'm old enough to drink... lol.

    I'm looking forward to lots of plot development as well as some more NaruSasu tidbits to keep them getting closer. I would like to say I can hope for some bizarre strange array of events that can give me a mpreg Sasuke, but I won't push my luck on such awesome fiction. Also, not to mention Itachi's little conversation about their father pushing them together and the whole males can't have kids kinda threw that notion out the window... unless Fugaku knew something neither Mikoto or Itachi thought up... hmmm... Nah, I'll leave your story alone. Stop over thinking it and enjoy.

    Thanks for the awesome! ^___^
    Just what I needed.
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  • From hsosborne on August 12, 2009
    let's just see how having that memory back works between them
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2009
    Ooooo,Sasukes fairy instincts are gonna be pining for Naruto's body from now on. RAWR. hahaha. Yay for this chapter, and that flash back scene was lovely. :)
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  • From ANON - koku-sama on August 11, 2009
    that chapter was soooooooooooo great.=D it had me at the edge of my set wondering what was happening. the part about what happened between sasuke and naruto was HOT! great job!!!XD i cant wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From sonotgoingthere on August 09, 2009

    I love this story. You've got me hooked on the mystery, and I love seeing a new chapter and thinking that it will explain somethings but obscure other things.

    I like the way you've reflected the Ninja world in the Fey world - Fire Fairies, or people of the nation of fire. The explanation for the Kyuubi, Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, all of it is riveting.

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  • From ANON - gigglesmirks on August 09, 2009
    loved it loved it loved it.

    more please?
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  • From sangohoushi on August 09, 2009
    omg. i am in shock. no words can describe your genius. you are....*kneels and worships*

    *CHIBI Sango gives lots of cookies*

    more please...?
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  • From hisoka on August 08, 2009
    im amazed with the power of a black light,and wary of peoples...intentions.i will now be wary of the black light in my friends room thought its mostly for dancing i shall still watch cautiously.so i cant decide wether fugaku is good or bad,and if the sighting of him again would be problematic or not.what is ibiki if he knows all this?problems solves and more have arised.cant wait for updates
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2009
    I love you and your work. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 08, 2009
    omg I soooooooooo Love this fic, I thought it was on hiatus or something and was sad to think I might not get to read it, but here are two lovely two chapters and I cant get ENOUGH,,,awesome awesome story cant wait for more and I have to tell you I love all your work and I thank you for taking the time to share these with us, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Mayab on August 07, 2009
    Yes! Awesome chapter! And story. And everything. Can't wait for an update.
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  • From claudine113 on July 13, 2009
    this story is great, you had (and have :D) wonderful idea with it! I'm waiting for another chapter, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! :)
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  • From GudenMulle on July 08, 2009
    When i realized that this was the last chapter - FOR NOW(!! shakes fist) - I just screamed out loud "NOO!"
    GOD, I love this story! You need need need(!) to continue, and fast!
    The deductions-skills of kids is to so cute and entertaining to read about XD.
    It's very exciting, and I'm officially incaptured.
    That was such an evil place to stop! Are Sasuke and Naruto mated or something? :o
    I really look forward to the next chapter, and I wish you good health!
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  • From itasasunaru on June 24, 2009
    I am absolutely OBSESSED with this story. It is seriously my favorite NaruSasuNaru/SasuNaruSasu story I have EVER read and I have read several. I love the fact that this story isn't flat out porn and how it has an amazing plot line that draws a reader in. It is so creative too, the plot is unlike anything I have ever read before and when I found out Sasuke (and Naruto to an extent) were fairies I had to do a double take. It was so unexpected yet it fit perfectly. Both your writing style and content are ingenious. I am looking so forward to your next update!!!
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  • From on June 12, 2009
    Ah ha! I have finally had the time and ability to get on the computer! (My computer at home is having serious, serious issues) I'm so glad you updated! And the fact that we're FINALLY going to find out about the black light next chapter is so freaking exciting! Yeah, Jelp!
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