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Reviews for Afraid of the Dark

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2010
    Thanks for the great New Year's gift to all your readers Jelp!!! I love this story and I go to your sites at ygal ff and aff almost weekly...okay more like daily just to check on updates and what not so...yeah thanks for updating one of my favorite stories...Happy New Year!!
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  • From sonotgoingthere on January 02, 2010
    I love this story. Even after some time from the last chapter, I remember everything that happened. It's so good it stays in your mind and I keep looking for it in the updates.
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  • From ANON - Nami on January 02, 2010
    Time jump! Awwww yeeeeah! I don't remember if I ever reviewed this story or not, but I loves it so. The pacing of their development is great. And Kakashi's intro? Also loved. His interaction with everyone, and then Naruto's 'you're like a genie!!' thing was adorable. And poooor Sasuke XD! And poor Itachi's jaw XD (And is it bad that after reading that Itachi has business to attend to my mind went to 'mythical things, canon Itachi does what... does that mean he's going to meet Kisame the worlds worst and most inappropriate little mermaid or siren and pal around...!?'... and now I regret it cause Kisame half naked and grinning, singing sailors out to sea to die with that rattling giggle voice is horrible thoughts).

    But I can't wait for the time jump. Mmm, development. And then maybe Sasuke won't feel like such a waffle. And be the sparkling happy fairy Naruto believes he can be... :|.
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  • From ANON - Chisama on January 02, 2010
    There's a perfect moment in this story where all the characters come into the room from the hallway...it's just so reminiscent of the actual series's humor that makes this fanfic so relatable and likeable! You're a fantastic writer, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 25, 2009
    I so agree with what you wrote here...

    Never ignore that feeling in your gut. Instinct keeps you alive when logic fails. ~ Jelp


    When ever I ignore my gut feeling it ALWAYS leads to some misfortune or trouble in my life that would have been better to have advoided!!
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 25, 2009
    Just the Beginning Chap 2

    So excited at this turn of events and looking forward to what happens next. :) I am worried about what Naruto said before though....of if Sasuke was still Sasuke....I have a bad feeling it stands for more then Sasuke realizes and will be very scary!!! Love a good scary story!!! SHIVER!!!
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 25, 2009
    Afraid of the Dark Chap. 1

    Oh my gosh!! This is just so cute and adorable!! I just love the whole theme and the details. I think you really got across just how scary it is for kids that are afraid of the dark. I so was one of those kids to when I was young. As an adult that was afread of the dark as a kid I so was more sympathetic when my kids had fears and so did not try to brush it off like some adults do. Kids have fears and they need the parents to go through and show them the closets are empty and the space under the bed is too full of toys for any monster to fit.(Thats what I used to show my kids when they were little. It helps them alot.) So I am so looking forward to the rest of this story!!! :)
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  • From Bluesake on October 23, 2009
    I really am enjoying this story. Different from what i've read before. I like it a lot. I wanna know what happens! : D
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2009
    Jelp I must confess that you are responsible for many of my sleepless nights..I have to admit that I have read every single one of your stories in one freaking sitting(yes just one) because they are that good...I look up at the clock on my computer screen or my cell phone (I read them on my cell too) and will be like 3:00 am and I'm like damn 15 more minutes until the Welcome to our daily down time...blah blah...and then I have to give it up until the next day...Thank you for sharing your creativity and amazing writing talent with all of us here on AFF and FF and..you and so many other's have made the last 10 months so enjoyable for me...(10 months is about how long I've been aware of this whole AFF and FF naruto fandom) I always get so giddy when I see your penname or the name of another of the authors in your close author family..like darkabino's or michelerene's.

    Again Thank you for another chappie for this story...waiting patiently..for the next instalment of any and all of your works.
    A sincere fan,
    Patty
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  • From DevilLived on October 17, 2009
    Awesome. Yes. More please. :P

    Love the tension in Sasuke and Naruto's relationship and the uncertainty about their feelings. Makes for a much more interesting plot than if they just got together easily. Can't wait for the next chapter~
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  • From ANON - Sara on October 15, 2009
    Okay, so I was reading this. And I didn't realize that it was Jelp-san writing this. And I thought to myself, "You know, this writer feels a lot like Jelp-san. I mean, she really paints a vivid picture of what is going on. And Mikoto's story? Fucking riveting." Then I go to the next chapter and glance at the author's name for future reference... And it's Jelp-san. *major sweatdrop moment*

    So yeah, this was pretty damn awesome and I like your take on hidden villages and the destruction Kyuubi caused. Hopefully (hopefullhopefullyhopefully) there will be another update soon because I am addicted to your stories like they're crack.

    Much Much Love.
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  • From ANON - Oishii on September 14, 2009
    I was very surprised at how this story has been going and couldn't even stop myself once I started! I actually started last night and was scared to look out my blinds for fear of trolls. I'm 25 years old. ): . My Gods, I need more! I'll be stubbornly checking back for new chapters each night! Continue making it long and fulfilling. It feels like I've barely scratched the surface on this story and I hope that's the truth! You rekindled the flame on what I thought was a lost interest in "unique" and alternative story lines. I hope to see more!
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  • From GudenMulle on August 27, 2009
    Oh ..
    Like Jiraya, but hell, I always do that :P
    Loving Itachi :D
    Angry at Fugaku, but had sort of seen it comming..
    I'm really curious as to what the thing with the touch means!
    I'm worried for Sasuke and Naruto, I hope they end up at the same conclusion, that be either friends or lovers.

    Looking forward for the next chapter!
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  • From serenagold on August 16, 2009
    Oh shit!! Surprise sex scene!!! lol


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  • From ANON - Violet Siren on August 14, 2009
    This is a fantastic story so far. I almost wish that you could have made this into a novel and then had a director make it into a movie cause its so awesome. I like where the plot is going and hope to read more soon.

    Best Wishes,

    V. Siren
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