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By : sris
  • From Irana on February 21, 2010
    *deep, happy sigh*
    Yes.
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  • From Irana on February 21, 2010
    Whew!
    *wipes forehead*
    Damn, that was hella hot.
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  • From Irana on February 21, 2010
    Well... finally! I've been reading, wondering what the hell happened to their friendship, and then BAM! There it is. *shakes head* kakshi can be a complete idiot at times. Telling Iruka he freaked would have been much better than saying he overreacted. Way to build it up!

    Anyway, I promised myself I'd comment, as I've read "Square the Circle" (loved it) and "Soft Option" (really loved that) and didn't comment, so I promised myself I'd comment on this.
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  • From morphingbutterfly on September 25, 2009
    oh wow...that was a great story....boy i could feel the emotions in it...and as much as i love iruka..i just wanted to kick his tail when he mentioned about that otake dude asking him to move in...shakes head....it takes a lot for me to get into a story...and i did with this one....that definately makes it a great story in my opinion ^_^
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  • From suzannecmc on February 24, 2009
    awww...I like a happy ending.
    you seemed a littled rushed on this one, but the real world does get in the way!!!
    or maybe I wasn't expecting Iruka to let it go as smoothly.
    well good for Kakashi! Your Kakashi (and Iruka for that matter) deserved a happy ending.

    I loved it!
    I love your descriptions, they really are poetic, and beautifuly visual.

    perhaps a summer "wedding"? hint hint

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  • From ReixDragon on February 19, 2009
    Hello hon. Excellent story, but i suppose i expect nothing less from you. Really amazing work though. I love the way you write. So emotional and thought out. I had to laugh, i'm pretty sure that I ask you every time i review if you're on another site. Sry. Yes, i'm on ff which is the best for getting reviews. Lots of people don't use it cuz their worried about the content of their stories but everything i've written has been put up there so i'm sure you're fine. I'm also on Y! gallery and i'm trying to get my LJ working again. Y!gal is the best for keeping in contact with other people. this site is terrible for that. Hope you like what i've been working on. I'm on all those other sites as reixgaara (and here of course). this is the profile with my new RP stories.
    Anywho, i have a few ideas for writing which i'd love to bounce off you. Maybe we could work one together. Or hell, i'd love to see you just write one. God knows you'd probably do better with it than I. Anywho, i think i'm off to reread a bunch of your stuff cuz it's just soooo good.
    I'm so happy that they got together in the end. I so did love the way that this story was so much more emotional and internal thought based than others. You really do have a knack for writing. Well i should get back to reading.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From ANON - Anise on February 17, 2009
    (8) I can't believe that this is already the end, it was another wonderful story from you and I hope I'll find another one from you in the future :)
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  • From animemetoo on February 17, 2009
    AWESOME! Loved this! A friend recommended it to me, I'm so glad she did! Great job!
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  • From satterb on February 17, 2009
    Poor Kakashi...Iruka made him sweat a little on the couch and begin to confess his feelings before letting him off the hook by telling him he turned down Otake. LOL. I loved this fic, and while I was happy to see the update posted, I will be sad to see it end. Thanks for everything!
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  • From RyuEarth on February 17, 2009
    This was completely incredible! XD
    I am so glad that they had their happy ending! ^^
    Thanks so much! =)
    And I vote for an epilogue please! =D
    I loved this, and I'm going to end before I ramble on ^^;;
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 17, 2009
    HAPPY ENDINGS ^_^ i love it ^_^
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  • From mizukiruhoh on February 17, 2009
    such a sweet story! what a great happy ending. :D
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  • From naracest on February 07, 2009
    Awwwwwwwwwwwww! I almost want to say that Kakashi deserves it but he's really paid his dues. I like the 'Iruka is the one screwing up in the present' aspect of this story. So often it's the other way around. Okay, you really really have to update this. Poor poor Kakashi. I really feel for him at this point. It's great inspiration for search for strength! I've got to get to the conflict in that story soon before i go crazy. Anyway, you're awesome and please keep going!
    Cheers
    Meg
    p.s. Hey, you on any other sites? Y! gallery or FF?
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  • From suzannecmc on February 06, 2009
    gah! I didn't realize you posted!!!

    And thank you for this twist!
    Thank you for not making it easy.
    I'm really enjoying this story.

    (I hate to ask but,
    ...are you going to fix the typos:o
    I'm sorry, I'm sorry)

    you know, your writing has matured since I
    started reading your stuff, I'm not sure how long ago.
    I think "Pining" was my first by you.
    You do nothing but improve. Good job:)

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  • From ANON - Meggie on January 31, 2009
    Wow though, if Iruka isn't a jerk XD waaaay.. I mean what Kakashi did was mean, but wowzers!
    I love this story so much!!!
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