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Reviews for Gaffe

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  • From mizukiruhoh on November 14, 2008
    OH MY GOD NOOOOOOOOOO! KAKASHI YOU IDIOT! nowi know why the title is Gaffe, what a huge GAFFE! OMG Kakashi you, you.... Kakashi needs to grovel- no, he needs to prove that he really loves Iruka! Actions pseak louder than words. he needs to print up flyers and post them all over the village. he needs to shout it from the Hokage Tower: "IRUKA I LOVE YOU. I WANT YOU! I"M IN LOVE WITH YOU AND WANT TO SPEND ALL OF ETERNITY WITH YOU!" ;D
    love this story!
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  • From naracest on November 14, 2008
    OMG, my heart is pounding like mad. I actually am having wild palpatations and am worried about my health at the moment. That was incredible. I knew kakashi'd done something horrible. I kinda want to kick his ass but i feel so bad for him. It takes a lot to go from a homophobe to realizing you're in love with a guy...or so i would assume. Good chapter. holy crap that was amazing. I'm still trembling. Keep going, this story is off the hook, charts, it's off everything!!
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From ANON - Anise on November 13, 2008
    God Kakashi you really are an idiot and that was a lot of mistakes he's going to have to make up for, that being said I like that there isn't going to be automatic forgiveness. As much as we may love these two it'll be interesting to see them work through this, I also kind of like that it's Kakashi that's pinning after Iruka because usually it's the other way around. Also that insight about it being alright to have sex with another guy on a mission but you can't be gay when you're home does at least add some background to what Kakashi was feeling and trying to come to grips with. Of course that's no excuse he was very cruel to Iruka, who was supposed to be his friend but it seems like a very real thing that could happen, unfortunately. It was by no means a happy chapter but it was definitely informative and it makes me excited to read the upcoming chapters :)
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  • From LadyLuck87 on November 13, 2008
    oh man... i really like this story! please update often! :)
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  • From RyuEarth on November 13, 2008
    This was incredible! O.O
    Thanks so much for the update and explaining so much as well!
    And I have to say that, Kakashi deserved everything, but I really want them to be able to be together, or at least for Iruka to not be sleeping around the way he is! T_T
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  • From ANON - aoh on November 08, 2008
    hey, i like this story! i wonder if iruka is having a steady affair with this guy...
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  • From naracest on November 07, 2008
    Oh my...what's going on? Is iruka having an affair of the body and heart with this guy? Is the heart only on his part? i feel bad for kakashi but what did he do?!? He said screw it up again...again! You're good. you're very good.
    you gotta keep going!!!!
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From RyuEarth on November 06, 2008
    They had a past relationship didn't they!?? It sounds so like it! T_T
    And they both need hugs!
    Thanks for the update, though I wish we the readers knew more about what happened to them before =/
    I hope that this OC character doesn't hurt Iruka! ^^;;
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  • From ANON - brukleflesche (not signed in) on October 31, 2008
    Ah! My heart's breaking right along with Kakashi's!

    Oh what fools these ninja be! XP

    This has definitely got my attention, and I'm looking forward to more. Best wishes!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2008
    so beatiful beatiful beatiful sorry for english i'm italian girl
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  • From naracest on October 30, 2008
    Oh, Hon, you're killing me!!! that was sooooo good but it crushed my heart!! Tell me that wasn't a one shot and there's more to come! Hey, are you on Y! gal? if not you should totally sign up. Oh, and keep writing. I have to go find something happy to read or i'll have to cry myself to sleep.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From ANON - Anise on October 29, 2008
    This is definitely not a good start for Kakashi, he's just so sad and depressed, I can't help but feel that whatever happened was more than just a gaffe. Also I thought it interesting that even though he's trying so hard to pretend that everything is alright even his friends can see that he's taken with Iruka. With a start like this it's definitely going to turn into an interesting story, I especially can't wait to find out what happened and how they're going to work through it.
    It's nice to see a new kak/iru story from you, it seems like forever since I last read one of your stories and as always I will look forward to the upcoming chapters :)
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  • From ANON - silverfox on October 29, 2008
    Poor poor Kakashi! *cries* I hope Iruka and him get together!!! oh Kami please let them get together!

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  • From RyuEarth on October 29, 2008
    So far, this sounds so depressing and yet, really interesting, but I hope that things will get better for the two! It sounds like there is more going on in Iruka's head then Kakashi realizes! =)
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on October 29, 2008
    This is promising.
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