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By : sris
  • From RyuEarth on January 06, 2009
    This chapter was incredible! XD
    Thanks so much for the update! I loved it! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 04, 2008
    (5) Kakashi finally starts to get things right and then Iruka has to go and screw with everything that had been going right. I can't help but feel that I'm going to be banging my head against my desk repeatedly with these two but I suppose it's only fair that it's not just Kakashi that's always screwing up, might as well see that Iruka isn't perfect either. I can't wait to see the conversation after all this :)
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  • From suzannecmc on December 04, 2008
    oh my, Iruka's being the fuck up. cool. not many stories
    with that perspective;)
    nicely written, thanks.
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  • From ANON - aoh on December 04, 2008
    still an difficult story, i like that. hmm so iruka doesn't treat kakashi all that well either. kakashi is being used, not using iruka. and iruka... it's sad, but i hope they can overcome all this and be happy together.
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  • From ChibiJubjub on December 04, 2008
    AMAZING!
    im in love with your writing.
    this is such an angsty tory, i really hope you update soon.
    this is so awsome.

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  • From ChibiJubjub on December 04, 2008
    SUCH A RIVITING STROY AND I HAVE ONLY NOW FOUND IT!
    i love it,
    so angsty and emotional and 'them'
    reads next chapter.
    *post this to the lj comm if you have lj.*
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  • From ReixDragon on December 03, 2008
    So freaking good!!!! Wow, amazing chapter. Poor Iruka. Even poorer Kakashi. I feel bad for the guy now. that would be like a kick in the teeth. God I feel bad for both of them. I really want to know what happened between Iruka and the other man after his wife left. Stupid Iruka should know that Kakashi is the better man now. Sigh. Well keep going. Great stuff. Hope all goes well with school and such.
    Cheers
    Meg
    P.S. This is my account that my kakagen rp is under if you were wondering about the other account. I'm just to lazy to log out. We should totally do a story together sometime!
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  • From satterb on December 03, 2008
    Damn! This story just keeps getting better and better!!! Poor Kakashi, and poor Iruka too. I can't wait to see where you take them. Thanks for updating so regularly. I love your work. Your characters are so true. Keep up the great work!
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  • From RyuEarth on December 03, 2008
    Thanks for the update! But no! Poor Iruka! T_T
    I hope that he's going to be ok! I also hope that that Iruka stops seeing that Otake guy, he's not worth all that stuff that Iruka is getting!
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  • From suzannecmc on November 27, 2008
    I like this wooing of Iruka:)
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  • From ANON - Hup on November 24, 2008
    Did you mean for the last sentence to sound that way or not? It was all sweet and then I read the "cut the cheese" line and start laughing. Unless where you live people don't use that as a reference for farting.
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  • From ANON - Anise on November 22, 2008
    (4) When I read the line 'he'd decided to make the chuunin accept his feelings' I was worried we would have a repeat of last chapter if Kakashi didn't realize you can't make someone feel something. But it was a nice surprise to see Kakashi putting so much thought into things that he thinks Iruka would like/enjoy. I loved the ending too it turned out very sweet, if Kakashi keeps this up he may win Iruka yet :)
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  • From mizukiruhoh on November 22, 2008
    so romantic! i love this latest chapter!
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  • From naracest on November 22, 2008
    Awwwwwww! That was adroable!!!!! YAAAAAAY!!! Not bad, kakashi, not bad at all. God i wish someone would take me on a date like that! Is Iruka still seeing the married guy? I feel so bad for him. If kakashi wasn't trying so hard i'd kick him in the teeth. I can't wait for more and i hope you like my newer stuff when you have the time.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From RyuEarth on November 22, 2008
    Kakashi was so cute in this chapter! I wish him alot of luck! He's going to need it! =)
    Thanks so much for the update! I loved it! ^^
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