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Reviews for Feeling the Heat

By : lexjamandme
  • From lara5170 on September 07, 2015
    This was very good and well written, I'm starting to question if you have the ability to write a story this 'is not' an excellent read. Thank you for being a writer.
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  • From ANON - Irol on November 09, 2010
    This was absolutely glorious! Wonderful writing and flowing dialogue!
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  • From ANON - anon on July 02, 2010
    love it! Love your writing style, especially the very funny dialog. Your characterization of naruto is so perfect. Sasuke too: we couldn't see inside him at all (which of course is sasuke all over). But his behavior was dead-on (as in: yes, he's uptight, but that doesn't mean he gives a shit what anyone thinks!). I loved how they bickered and yelled. Even when sasuke finally came to ask Naruto out, he found a way to make him miserable-- but just briefly! (and I do love a writer who actually gives naruto the love he needs.)

    Some strong mysteries remain hanging: who are these weird Uchihas? How did Sasuke get to be such a bastard? Yet, I like that: in a short story, as in life, we cannot learn everything as interesting characters pass through.

    And briefly, since I'm supposed to critique, I will: with the correct pronunciation of Sasuke, the U is completely swallowed, so it doesn't seem likely anyone would shorten the name to S'uke. Also, (forgive me!) the last lines were just a little sorta sappy for my taste. We readers understood already, and the story perfect already, without the last lines.

    Please keep writing this couple! You are wonderful and appreciated.
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on May 30, 2009
    You definitely write the hottest, most amazing stories I have ever read in the Naruto fandom and I can't wait to read the rest of them. This story, just like your others, was, beautiful, intimate, and had amazing dialogue. You are just, overall, amazing.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on December 21, 2008
    Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

    "Naruto continued to read and pretended not to see the tears that fell from black eyes. He was glad when Sasuke returned the favor."

    This was the saddest and most intimate line I have ever read. It had me balling my eyes out in a millisecond. I loved the plot, the descriptions and the meaningfulness behind every word said and written. The lemon was extremely hott yet at the same time very deep because of the flashbacks that were always coming up. I loved the sequence too btw.

    I have definitely not read a story this well done in a VERY long while. Well...for the record I love all your stories.

    Thank you. Thank you so much for writing something this amazing.

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  • From ANON - -xyz- on December 17, 2008
    BEAUTIFUL

    Thank you!
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  • From digiditz on December 02, 2008
    They have specific days for this? I've learn something new today. ~Marks both days on her calendar~ Are there days for other pairings? I need to do some research.

    This story was beautiful. Seriously one of your best, if only because I didn't have to wait through an emotionally draining multichapter epic adventure. Much love and appreciation to you.
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  • From ANON - doesn on December 01, 2008
    Hell yes, hell yes, hellyes hellyes hellyes. Gorgeous images and the pacing was damned near perfect.
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  • From Ikippiki on November 13, 2008
    Who cares about lateness when the story is as good as that one?
    I'm addicted to your stories!
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on November 04, 2008
    ahh, what a wonderful story. what I love most about the Naruto/Sasuke pairing is that its emotional capacity exceeds all the others, and you've definitely reached it! I was practically tearing. wonderful job. Stories like yours have me creeping into the Naru/Sasu/Naru fandom, which is a compliment, you can say, since I'm a dedicated Uchihacest fan. :3

    I'll definitely check back July 10! haha.
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 02, 2008
    you really have a thing for calling naru 'angel' lol. great fic.

    i never knew there was a narusasu day. does that make me a bad fangirl? lol
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  • From Allys on November 02, 2008
    LOL, Like you need to "practice" your SasuNaru *smirks*, XD. *Glomps U* This was sooo... Emotional. It was really good. LOL, I remember thinking at the beginning that damn, this was one of the only times I wanted to make the smut move faster so I could get to the story! XD. I love the angle you took for this, and the way you developed the story. I love how you write angst, even though sometimes it still scares me, lol (I'm really wussy about some things - rape mainly, so this was great.) I really liked that they took it slow and you had the utmost consideration for Sasuke's condition. I knew a girl in highschool who had a similar problem and she took a long time to feel comfortable in her own skin again. It damn near broke my heart when I realised that Sasuke wanted to die and when he disappeared from the hospital. And Itachi was a scary guy throughout XD. LOL, I really enjoy your Itachi. I see you have an ItaSai out XD. That is a MUST!! I'm gonna try to get to it tonight, but gods I'm woefully behind on my stories. *sighs*, but now I'm catching up! XD.
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  • From hisoka on October 30, 2008
    and itachi already likes him so theirs no meet the family kinda thing needed.sasukes only a complete bastard to everyone but itachi,hes a loving bastard to naruto.a good read,i think ive seen some others like this but their longer.i still liked this one
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  • From ANON - Danni on October 29, 2008
    I love how you mix in plot with lemonade so well! It makes the story steller for everyone! and OMG it was steller...thank you!
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  • From ladywolfTerri on October 29, 2008
    OMG!! That was such a wonderful fic!! I can't even tell you how great that was! The emotion, the personalities, the interplay between them. It was all so perfect! By the end it brought tears to my eyes! I loved it! Absolutely loved it!
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