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Reviews for Unless You're Dead, Get Out

By : ShinobiGoneWild
  • From Dragon7 on December 02, 2008
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
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  • From serenagold on November 30, 2008
    lol


    It was role playing all along!! (ALthough I must admit, I thought there was something off about how slutty Sasuke suddenly got too. ^^)
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on November 30, 2008
    :D!!!

    I just really, really like this story, and I'm gonna have to read it again later! Agggh, the spanking, the slightest edge of domination in Kakashi, Sasuke in his lap... my motor is RUNNING XD

    And on top of that, I like the meaning behind it ^^ I love Sasuke's reasoning for doing what he did, and now, yeah, I like thinking about the fact that he was extra pushy at the beginning because he was a bad actor ^__^ And the ending is really sweet, and a little sad, and it's not at all lame, or what you said XD I think it's great!

    I really look forward to more of your stuff!
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  • From tovah on November 27, 2008
    WoW! That was awesome,I would say you have a winner on your first sex scene.
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on November 26, 2008
    Yaaay!

    I really like your pushy, demanding Sasuke... he's so sweet, and sexy ^__^ And I love how they're so recklessly desperate for each other, once they start going.

    And this was FANTASTIC for your first time ;) I like your vocabulary, and the fact that you're not afraid to use it ^__^

    And more KakaSasu fans, I'm so excited!!!

    Now, I'm dying to know what happens next... was it a shadow clone? Was the real Sasuke watching from the shadows? Is this a trap? I'm very much looking forward to more!
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  • From Shaylilin on November 26, 2008
    I also am oneshot challenged. I feel your pain.

    I can't wait to see what happens when i'm not hanging from this cliff anymore.

    Good sex for a first time... I must applaud. :)
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  • From serenagold on November 26, 2008
    Hahahaha.. he almost beat the clock. One second to go and Sasuke's been snatched away! Poof! Gone!!! hehehehhehe
    Kakashi is in sooooo much trouble. I wonder who found them. ^^

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Aikotina on November 26, 2008
    .... SASUKE WAS A SHADOW CLONE?! *is now effing confused* haha. for being your first lemon; that was very well written! like a pro! The words and the story flow really well. And the .. imagery.. was very well done. being the perv i am; i could totally picture everything you wrote. haha. yeaaah. but now i want more! darn you and your cliff hanger! ^-^ update as soon as you can please!! :heart:
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  • From Dragon7 on October 27, 2008
    This is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From HannaFO on October 23, 2008
    Very nice :) I like the daring Sasuke!
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  • From LindyStar on October 23, 2008
    Wow, pushy uke shota Sasuke is a sex kitten! He sounded so needy though; must be so lonely for him, so hopefully Kakashi will give him some sexual healing XD
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  • From Aikotina on October 23, 2008
    first story huh? damn good for a first story. after this twoshot (? haha) i hope you continue writing. your style is nice and i didn't see much wrong with grammer and spelling. once or twice the wording was a tad awkward, but overall, i liked it. good job! ^--^ ::heart::
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  • From Shaylilin on October 23, 2008
    one word. ;) j/k!

    Not bad. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.
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