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Reviews for A Baby Story

By : chilepie
  • From Bookworm51485 on March 03, 2010
    Not a bad story, you portrayed the difficulty that many parents face when adopting non-infants well. I'm not a huge fan of altering character design just to fit certain molds. Sasuke is bigger and taller than Naruto, not the other way around. I know that many have a stereotypical seme/uke physical ideal, but that's the reality of the series. I'm also of a mind that the only way an author could realistically write a uke!Sasuke story is to make it AU because there's no way Sasuke of canon would be on the bottom, especially not to Naruto. But that's a whole 'nother thing.

    Also one additional point, Autistic kids are not retarded. Those are two completely different issues. Many kids with autism are actually EXTREMELY intelligent, they just have trouble interacting with the world in a 'normal' way.
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  • From ANON - kAT on February 26, 2010
    Awwww. God women and our saccarine-sweet image of babies, pets and what not. But the boys are cute. And it isn't MPreg, thank goodness!
    I like!
    Write MOAR!
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  • From on October 10, 2009
    Please tell me there more I hope you haven't forgotten about this story
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2009
    Please is this story going on? I really like it :)
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  • From on April 26, 2009
    I never get tired of reading this. Can't wait for more!!!! :D
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  • From on April 26, 2009
    Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Uncle Itachi here to the rescue!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2009
    Please please update this story soon !!!!! Thanks :)
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  • From ANON - sugar on February 17, 2009
    Poor Naruto and Sasuke :( But Itachi comes to save the day :) I can't wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - sweetdreams on December 29, 2008
    Please I can't wait for more chapters
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 21, 2008
    AWW! uncle Itachi to the rescue! tachi's so cool. lol.
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  • From asm613 on November 21, 2008
    (((Naruto’s laughter filled their home and Sasuke’s heart)))___How adorable is this story. It's so nice to read such an uplifting, loving family story.

    (((“Papa?” Minato said in a tone that made it clear he was asking if Sasuke was ok.
    Naruto smiled. Sasuke’s eyes widened and then glistened as unshed tears formed in them.
    “Yes baby, Papa’s fine.”)))___After reading how Sasuke was pouting because Minato wasn't calling him a name yet. Then reading how Minato protected Sasuke while he and Naruto were play fighting-followed by what Minato said and Sasuke's reaction__What a perfect moment. Yeah, warm fuzzies.

    Thanks for sharing the story with us.


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  • From Mija on November 18, 2008
    omg I love this, too cute and really unique so far, and the whole part with Annette was sad but helping to establish a plot me thinks, either way its too funny and I just love the way you write the baby , too cute, cant wait for more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From TiaA on November 17, 2008
    This is really a feel good story.

    Sasuke and Naruto as parents are always interesting to spectulate on and to write about.

    Okay, I like what you are doing with their relationship with their children. Little Minato is adorable in his Uchiha-ness. He's spunky, tough, and so smart that you just want to say "aww" each time he is in the scene.
    I can't wait for when Sasuke and Naruto go into their discussion and eventual adoption of Annette. She seems like she will need more attention than Minato. I wonder how will the couple cope with not a problem child, but a little girl that suggested to have suffered mental abuse. Children that have been abused have a hard time adjusting and then there are the trust issues. With such a little girl, a toddler, in their lives, it is a such a big cliff-hanger from my prespective.

    I enjoyed both chapters and I look forward to the next chapter.

    Sean
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  • From ANON - repanse on November 17, 2008
    Sweet story.
    Since when Naruto has a bulkier form?XD
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  • From Sylvir on October 22, 2008
    That was so cute even though I was expecting Sasuke to get called 'Mama'
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