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Reviews for Fallen Angel

By : pinklemonade5678
  • From ANON - ficfanic on May 05, 2011
    Would love to hear more of this story.
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  • From ANON - 2much4dis on July 07, 2009
    It was late when i found this and i didn't even log in, but i had to review! XD YOU ARE A GOD! Plz update soon! plz!!!! I luv Iruka's innocence...well his sum wat innocence. Plus Kakashi was just so...i can't even explain it, finish it plz!!! on my knee's here
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  • From mizukiruhoh on October 28, 2008
    Yes, FFnet can be hard on their writers some times. :D I think the story is fascinating. :D A little fastpaced sure, and grammar problems sure, but that's okay. You're getting out your idea, and it may spur on something better in the future. Good job writing so far. Poor Iruka. Makes me sad seeing him abused like that. Sniff sniff. sob. look forward to the next installment. :D
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  • From arabuzumaki on October 25, 2008
    this was really nice to read.

    only a few grammatical errors but nothing major that i picked up. hope u get a beta though.
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  • From ichkak on October 24, 2008
    Ahh Poor Ruka! Glad he's got a nice Kakashi to look after him. Great update, very moving.
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  • From RyuEarth on October 19, 2008
    Thanks for the update, and I'm sorry to hear about the people on ff! But the story is really good, and I like it still! I think it is cute that Kakashi gave Iruka a name, though I am curious, if Iruka is really 12 years old? I wasn't sure if that was solid or just an observation ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2008
    i like it...please update soon!
    what will kakashi will do next?
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  • From honZeldaFitz on October 18, 2008
    I'm curious to see where this goes. I'm enjoying it so far. Thanks for posting. ^__^
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  • From RyuEarth on October 15, 2008
    This sounds really interesting! Though, I'm now curious about how the boy ended up with Orochimaru and what will happen to his afterwards! =)
    I have to say that I like this plot line! ^^
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