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By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Aingyl on April 10, 2011
    That was a lovely ending. *sigh* Srsly? I about choked on a Sun Chip when I read the last line. That was great lol
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  • From ANON - Chanii on July 08, 2010
    I think I have become a Jelp groupie.Not a stalker, I swear >_
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  • From Samric on January 17, 2010
    Well, I'm mourning the escaped chance of further NaruSasu porn, but that ending fit better. Excellent as always.
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  • From sangohoushi on October 15, 2009
    AHH!!! lol!!

    i loved it!
    oh, that was funny. and awesome!
    perfect

    *CHIBI Sango gives cookies for a job well done*
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  • From nivell on November 06, 2008
    Haha, oh my god, this fic is amazing! It has humor, and the sexual tensino was just wow. Loved it!
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  • From HeartLessWolfGirl on October 25, 2008
    OMG that was GREAT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rachel on October 18, 2008
    That. Was. So. Good. Even without the porn. Gah, your amazing. What great plot.
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  • From blackestrose on October 16, 2008
    I think..... there should be more. Not make it a one-shot.
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  • From ANON - esachinaloca on October 14, 2008
    Ay Dios Mio!! that's was so funny!!! loved every minute of it!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on October 14, 2008
    Purely hilarious and fluffy! Loved it :)
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  • From Allys on October 14, 2008
    That was really sweet and funny XD. Both boys were adorably glompable. But I'm gonna pull a Sasuke and ask - "Where's the next part? Where’s the porn?" XD LOLZ *Loves on you*. Seriously though this was really funny, I love how you softly mocked the genre and the idea of Naruto continuing on in Jiraiya's footsteps is surprisingly one that I've never seen before. It's an awesome concept, very witty in how the boys got together *hugs u*. I'm sure Hina must be head over heels.
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  • From lovesnogger on October 13, 2008
    sexy do a follow up!
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  • From ValheruYaoi on October 13, 2008
    LMAO... ok this had me crackin up so much through it. it's a nice twist on the normal story... and more realistic to how they act around each other... so great job :) nice ending
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 13, 2008
    I LOVED this story! Too cute for words!
    Best line: And the Ninja Leader pounded the Captain into the floor all day and all night long.
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  • From Telpei on October 13, 2008
    Ahahahaha, that was too cute!! I love it :) All the innuendos with the porn novel were hilarious. Ninja leader and captain indeed. Naruto was never known for his subtlety, but then again Sasuke probably needed that blunt approach to get through his thick skull. They're both so stubborn! lol. I loved this story! Great work :)
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