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Reviews for Erotica

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Xenobia on October 13, 2008
    That was pure unadulterated...evil. Not fair ending the story just as it was getting good.
    *Sighs* But...I still love your work.
    >X
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  • From ANON - peanut on October 13, 2008
    XD XD XD Soo cute! Soo funny! Soo Hot! Was laughing non-stop at the end! Naruto & Sasuke are both baka!! But cute baka-s that are meant for each other!!
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  • From Prism0467 on October 13, 2008
    This was GENIUS.

    Write another one.
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  • From Daktalakpak on October 13, 2008
    This is amazing story! Wooohoo.. you got me laughing and enjoying every minute of it.
    all I can realyl say is wow. xD Nicely done.
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  • From UzumakiTheDobe on October 13, 2008
    Aw, it was cute. And i loved the end XD "And the Ninja Leader pounded the Captain into the floor all day and all night long." lol XD
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  • From lilliandragon on October 13, 2008
    This is great!
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on October 13, 2008
    Not bad.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Kismet on October 13, 2008
    Hot story, very well written, definitely a good read. Thanks ^^
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 13, 2008
    awww cute! they finally said they love each other
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  • From ladygizarme on October 12, 2008
    That was wonderful. And hot, definitely hot. I loved the whole setup with the novel and Sasuke's edits--very clever. I totally knew what Sasuke was going to do lol (it was still AWESOME though ^_^), but Naruto's twist with the new story was unexpected and wholeheartedly welcome, too! Everything came together really nicely, and I *loved* that whole final scene.

    Great story! &hearts

    ~ lg
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