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Reviews for Birthdays and Bank Holiday Mondays

By : lexjamandme
  • From ladygizarme on October 11, 2008
    This story is really sweet! Naruto's concern about Sasuke being colorblind makes me 'awww' and giggle. Sasuke's real reason for using that towel makes me awww even more! I love how a teasing phrase from Kiba turned into such a fun tradition for Naruto and Sasuke lol.
    And, rather than having full-out smut, I think the way you fit in sweet descriptions of different moments with them was awesome. Getting a glimpse of more than one hot moment between them is actually just as satisfying to me, if not more so, in this instance. It goes really well with the style of storytelling in this one.
    Wow, I really like this line: whimpering Naruto’s name, begging for him to stop, to never stop, to hurry up and to, dear god, please, slow down AMAZING description. &hearts

    Sasuke suspected that Gaara knew though and considered it a personal gift that somewhere, on his birthday, Sasuke Uchiha was taking it up the ass.     ahahahaha, another great line. *gigglesnort*
    “Hmmm, this towel smells like you, Sasuke. Nice.” awww! (again hehe)
    mmm, and Naruto's description of what he was going to do "to Sasuke's shirt" lol..ahh, yumm
    AHAHAHAAHA i love Naruto's excuse for why they had to leave the party. And Sasuke playing along. Yeah, that's not obvious, guys. *giggle* Too cute.
    The description of how haphazardly their clothes were discarded (lol, the buttons DID get ripped off.. and not one but TWO items of clothing on the fan..lmao)
    And Sasuke's gift: fucking awesome. Sweet and hilarious and HOT all at once. heehee PERFECT

    Awesome job, I'm so glad I got to read this! Thank you!

    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on October 11, 2008

    I LOVED IT! Hilarious, not going that much into detail but still, so fun to read! Beautiful, heart-warming, hott as hell and perfect. Naruto truly thanks you right now for the birthday gift ;)
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  • From ANON - Yuri on October 11, 2008
    Can I say that I love, love , love, LOVE this story. God I wish I read that book...and everytime I read about a new hoiliday I'll think of Sasuke taking it up the ass!

    Is it hot in here?
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  • From Kimra on October 11, 2008
    Is that a real book? Somehow I want to own it now. :P

    Nice story. :D
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  • From TheSimi on October 11, 2008
    I love this, I love this and I love this!!! I would have said more but I'm all reviewed out after Y and FF.net. I just wanted you to know how much I appriciate you talent and writings THANK YOU!

    (Now I have reviwed everywhere and still not a copy and paste woohooo!!!!)
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 11, 2008
    lol. loved it but what happened to the sex?
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  • From ANON - TalkingButterfly on October 11, 2008
    Yeah, that's a good one! Congratulations and keep writing like this. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2008
    By all means, please feel free to 'annoy' me with your totally amazing oneshots as much as you like :D But honestly its not an annoyance AT ALL.
    I loved this of course, it was sweet and smexy and full of SasuNaruSasu goodness. Sasuke made sure his Naru had the bestest birthday ever. I'm Eagerly awaiting your next multi-chaptered story and any oneshot that you come up with. May your plot bunnies always be plentiful.
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