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By : sweetangel23
  • From Jan on March 01, 2009
    Love it! Though, I’m not sure if you already decided on whom your going to pair Naruto with, but I really, really hope that you pair him with both Sasuke and Neji, threesomes are always more yummy and interesting then a twosome :D I mean, can you imagine all the things those two could be doing to our beloved Naruto? Think of all the delicious possibilities ^_^ Please, please say that you’ll think about it?

    Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^

    Jan

    PS: If it’s not t o much to ask is there a way that you could email me a notice when you next update?
    My email is naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com

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  • From LadyWolf on February 03, 2009
    WOW...that is so OCC of Neji...I love it! I love Neji and all, but I would love to have Sasuke and Naruto hook up....but you know what would be better.....Naruto and Sasuke AND Neji....shit, that would be sooooo HOT!!!!

    Post soon!
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  • From goodchaos on November 12, 2008
    Read your authurs note... All I ask is in the end, Please be *NaruSasu* It would make me so Happy!!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on October 19, 2008
    Oh and I'd also like to advise you that the formatting of your newest chapter is odd. It stretched past the edge of the screen. I'd try re-uploading, maybe using a different method to see if it fixes the problem. Otherwise, maybe asking one of the mods for help.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on October 19, 2008
    New installment isn't horrible, but I will advise that you avoid any blatant or excessive Sakura bashing. It's one of the quickest ways to get the more discerning people on the site to not take you seriously. Also this chapter felt slightly rushed in how in went through the action, like you were trying to find the quickest way to get from beginning to end. I find a way to add a bit more too it, though not so much that it's weighed down.
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  • From ANGELJUSIK on October 18, 2008
    dammit !!! why they(Naruto and Sasuke) just not have hot sex... i don't like waiting....make that Neij freak and Sakura slut just to end together...and end of the story....


    P.S. i hope that pairings in this story will be SasuXNaru....i like you story very much...i just don't like to wait
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  • From tawanawelch on October 18, 2008
    Damn!! Sasuke was so pressed he mentioned those flowers a dozen times. With Sakura as his date tonight, Neji will get all the alone time he wants to be with his blond. Sasuke'll be fuming by the end of the party.
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  • From mls1971 on October 18, 2008
    love this story!!!! i can't wait to find out who naruto picks!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on October 16, 2008
    I think your writing skills are pretty good. Of course, I'm no writer either but the flow is going well.*8) OMG!!! Naruto hugged Neji woohoo!! but he will have alone time with Sasuke. Now Sakura's in the mix thinking she has a chance with Sasuke. She's so annoying but at least she likes Naruto and beating up on him. Can't wait for next chapter.
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  • From tawanawelch on October 16, 2008
    Oh I like this fic and I would pick Neji but I know how much everyone loves Sasuke for Naruto. I do too but I pick Neji. Who is Gaara marrying in a couple of weeks or is it someone we don't know?
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  • From serenagold on October 16, 2008
    haha.. she doesn't stand a chance! ^^

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on October 15, 2008
    i smell a soap operish scenerio at this party! and a lot of blubbering melodrama!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on October 15, 2008
    Your definitely not bad, especially for a first time writer. Just keep it up and I think you'll be fine. As for the pairing, please don't do a threesome. They've become way to cliche, as have SasuNaru stories. NejiNaru isn't the most unique pairing either, BUT it's a lot less common than SasuNaru. Personally, I say unless you want a story that's just like 500 million other people, avoid the SasuNaru and avoid the threesome.

    As for the story itself, I think it could be interesting. Definitely want to see where it goes.

    *On a slightly different note, I've been reading fandom for awhile now, read through a lot of different stories, and I've found that readers tend to have patterns when authors put things up for vote. When there's a pairing, if Sasuke's in it, Sasuke is very likely to win (though that often depends on how the story is presented in summary). Also with mpregs, if an author asks how many babies and gives numbers, the readers will always go as high as they can. Who cares that 8 babies is overkill, we want to see 8 babies. Oh and of course the twins, one girl and one boy. I guess it's easier to do that than to have to pick a gender. Personally I always just go for the boys because I'm not a lover of children, but little boys just do something to me. They have something that little girls just don't have. Maybe the knowledge that they'll most likely grow up and lose this visible sweetness to some degree, it makes you feel like you should cherish it. Anyways, I'd watch out for those things. Also a lot of authors fall into the trap of the triangle (in most cases with Sasuke being the 'good' one). They tend to have one part of the chasing pair be 'good' and the other part 'bad'. He's (usually Neji or Gaara, in one story both) not very nice in how he goes about things, he's a moron, he's a jackass, even when the person (usually Naruto) chooses (usually Sasuke), he still refuses to give up and let Naruto be happy. I'd watch for that also, you don't want to become a cliche-ish author. Your a step above the rest at this point because your writing isn't bad, just keep going.
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  • From mls1971 on October 15, 2008
    i love this story!!!! i can't wait for you to update!!!! keep up the great work!!!!
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  • From ItaNarulover on October 15, 2008
    I loved it! I really like possesive and jealous Uchihas and Hyuugas, it's so fun!
    Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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