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By : TheSimi

From ChiyokoChan on December 22, 2010
Ahhh!!! Sasuke you stupid teme!! But omg is there gonna be ItaNaru love going on? Maybe some ItaNaruSas? lol threesomeness rules xD

But omg I cant wait to read the next chapter of your story! Its really gets ya into tha hyper yaoi fangirl mode ;D
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From ANON - serina002000 on October 22, 2010
I really love this story and hope that you continue it. The heartbreak that Naruto is feeling and the pain and suffering the Sasuke is feeling is absolutely real. I hope this story has a happy ending for all.
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From bloodshound on September 02, 2010
this is so messed up...i so can't wait to see where it goes... i also hope susuke gets over himself enough to see whats important.
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From ANON - nea on July 24, 2010
Wow. I really liked chapter 8. :) I'm a huge fan of Naru/Tachi fics so I think it would be cool to see Naruto explore his feelings on that dream. I hope you are doing well and I wanted to let you know I really enjoy your fiction, even though I don't often review because I'm lazy. :P
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From ANON - Mickytachi on July 04, 2010
OMG. This story is so awesome ! It makes my heart ache too, because it has some sad parts, I really love stories that can do that to me.
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From Eremi22 on May 09, 2010
I only recently found this, and I like the way it is going. I hope to seem more of it soon!
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From ANON - ita on March 19, 2010
YES! YES! YES! How perfect is that. Please i'm begging you. Pls continue. I absolutely you it.
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From ANON - makoed on September 29, 2009
Oooooh... ItaNaru.. man i luv tht pairing.. nice story and good plot.. everyone is involved with one another somehow...lol... please update soon!
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From ANON - ItaNaru on September 19, 2009
That's a shocker. I would say it seems like it's going to a better direction. I think Diedera is cool but Itachi is a better choice. Hotter for me anyway. Anything with Itachi on it is hot, especially the way you describe him. What's going on w/ Madara. It doesn't seem like it's going to sound good. I'd like a good Madara for a chance.
Thank a million for the update.
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From ANON - hpn on September 19, 2009
Oh! Wow! ItaNaru would be awesome.
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From ItaNarulover on September 19, 2009
You love torturing me, don't you? With the cliffhangers and pairing confusion?
I must be a masochist because I loved this chapter, you probably know which part I loved the most, but the entire chapter was great.
I really like Iruka in your story, he's the usual mother-hen but a little more understanding than most, and I think he was right about what he told Sasuke. Though, what he said is almost impossible to achieve because most humans are a greedy and possessive by nature. When loving someone and wanting to be with that person despite thinking that he or she deserves better, it's still incredibly difficult to let go and move on. You want to be with that person even though you know you're wrong for him or her.
And in Sasuke's case it's more or less impossible. He's an Uchiha and he's fought hard to be with Naruto, so he probably thinks he deserves to be with him. He cannot let him go, which I think he should.
Though, a very positive thing is that you didn't harm Naruto and Gaara. Yay! Our racoon and fox are alright. That made me really happy because as I said before they've suffered enough already. Though this chapter made me change my mind about Neji and Gaara's feelings towards each other, before I didn't think that Neji cared about him but now I see that he truly does. I feel sorry for them both, I really do adore that pairing. They're adorable together, I do hope things will work out between them.
Kakashi and Sai are at it as usual, that's always amusing to read about. Poor Naruto, he must be scarred for life. =)
And finally, the dream. OMG! At first I was like, "that's Sasuke.... *sigh*.." but then when Naruto screamed Itachi my jaw unhinged and fell to the floor. This was what I had been waiting for but didn't think would happen, so I'm so incredibly happy right now. *cries tears of joy*
I'm practically running around in circles with excitement for the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens.
I'm still confused about the pairings because you keeps sending us mixed signals. Deidara, Sasuke, Itachi??? I kinda excluded Madara because he seems too old.... but now I don't know. *sobs hysterically*
�nnu ett grymt avsnitt! Jag �r s� glad att du uppdaterade, de gjorde min dag s� mycket b�ttre. Hoppas att du inte har st�rts av mitt babblande, ibland vet jag sj�lv inte n�r jag borde sluta, speciellt n�r jag �r hyperaktiv. :P
Hoppas att allt �r bra med dig och att livet leker.
Ha det s� bra du bara kan.
Kramar // ItaNarulover

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From ANON - Anonymous on September 18, 2009
Sasuke still disappoints. He is still taking calls from Gaara. After the whole pushing in and marking him so that Naruto would see thing. The fact that you know he might be looking for sex, you still take his call?

You overdo the whole can't get over love thing with Naruto in my opinion. He had the right attitude. It may hurt but you can move on.

How many of us are Still with our first love? Our first lover? Are they even the same people? The answer is not many.

And in most cases it isn't even over cheating.

That said, I can live with it if you put them back together. It seems like you are heading that way. If I was Naruto's friend I would smack him in the head for doing it, hope Kiba does. But I could live with it.

On the other hand I can't get Madara out of my head. You describe him much like canon. Which reminds me of Jiraiya. In canon he is over fifty but looks twenty years younger, and unlike his teammates he isn't using a jutsu to get that.

Sure Madara is an evil bastard but of all the Uchiha he is the only one with a playful side. Naruto likes Orange. I can see the roleplay now. Sasuke might complain about Naruto being a one trick pony but Madara could fix that. Because Tobi is a good boy.

On the Itachi front Naruto is already having naughty thoughts. They are bonding over Ai. He would be good for grounding them both, keeping them from being to Uchiha.
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From ANON - cocopower1 on September 18, 2009
At first I thought Naruto would be with Itachi until Deidara came into the picture...now I'm definetly not sure. Loving the fic!
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From ANON - Hallween on September 17, 2009
O.o Naruto's dream was hot...>.> fuck Sasuke i say go for itachi or Deidara.
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From ItaNarulover on August 04, 2009
Kyaaa! A new chapter! This totally made my day, which until now had sucked because I'm sick at the moment, so I'm really happy now. :) And what a chapter by the way, I've god an 'oh my god' feeling coursing through my core.
Firstly, I love you for putting Deidara into the story, I totally cracked a smile at the way he and Naruto met. The boy with the broom made me laugh, that was hilarious, though I can understand him. :P I also love that you wrote that Deidara couldn't be mistaken for a girl despite his somewhat feminine appearance, because I really don't understand how people can mistake him for being a girl, he looks very male to me... *smirk* I'm glad you share my opinion. :)
Itachi's adorable with Aiko, I can see him holding her to his chest like that, so cute! *fangirl squeal* And the there was Madara! Too bad he's over fifty, or else I would have thought he would be one to fight for Naruto's affection along with Sasuke and maybe someone else. You've got me extremely confused about the main pairing of this story, I honestly can't tell which it will be, but perhaps that's your intention?
At first I thought that Deidara and Naruto might get together, but Naruto doesn't seem to have any further interest in him beyond that of friends, so I don't know. Itachi is dependent of Naruto because of Aiko but he doesn't seem to like Naruto in a romantic way at all. Sasuke still wants Naruto back, and somehow it seems as if he might succeed, which worries me because I believe that he doesn't deserve a second chance, especially for keeping the "relationship" with Gaara for so long. I'm so confused, I really can't wait to see how it will turn out.
Speaking of Gaara, I don't hate him at all. He's in love with someone who clearly doesn't love him back, and that makes my heart bleed out to him especially after reading about the incident in this chapter. Poor little raccoon... :(
Oh, of course, I forgot... damn cliffhanger! Though, I'm not too mad because I use them as well, but as a reader they're worse than Gai in a pink ballerina outfit bending forward.... horrifying, yes, that would be the proper term. *shudders*
I just hope that both Naruto and Gaara is alright, they've both gone through so much pain and heartache that it would be unfair to cause them more. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out.
Det h�r var verkligen ett fantastiskt kapitel, jag �r helt chockad av allt som h�nde i det. Man blev glad men �nd� ledsen, orolig men f�rv�ntansfull. Du beh�ver inte g�mma dig under stenen l�ngre, jag �r d�r och skyddar dig tillsammans med Gaara och hans yxa :P. M�nga l�sare som inte sj�lva skriver kan oftast inte f�rst� att kapitel inte skriver sig sj�lva och att f�rfattarna ocks� har ett eget liv d�r mycket kan ske. L�t dig inte p�verkas av kommentarer d�r folk klagar, ta din tid f�r det �r viktigt att man inte k�nner sig tvingad, dessutom �r alla dina ber�ttelser och kapitel s� oerh�rt v�lskrivna, s� det �r b�ttre att du tar den tid du beh�ver f�r att kunna skriva p� ett s�dant s�tt. Och att ha press p� sig tar �ven det roliga ur skrivandet, man k�nner inte l�ngre en lika stor entusiasms f�r det, s� t�nkt inte p� jobbigt folk och skriv f�r n�jet och viljans skull. :)
Hoppas att allt �r bra med dig. Ha en trevlig fortsatt vecka.
*Kramar*

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