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By : TheSimi

From ItaNarulover on April 14, 2009
awwwwwwww.....poor Itachi!!! *sniffles before embracing the screen in an attempt to comfort him*
This chapter was a very relieving one, not only did we get to know why Gaara came to Sasuke and why they got together, but also seeing Itachi finally breaking out of his shocked state and acknowledging Aiko. And Sasuke's self-delusion was greatly written, he's such an asshole for assuming Naruto will come back to him or that despite everything that he's done that he's truly in love with him. Gaara's statement seemed fairly accurate, Sasuke only seem to love Naruto when he knows he can't have him, because as soon as he does he turns elsewhere. And speaking of Gaara, I don't hate him nor blame him, he's inlove with Neji whom he can't have, so he wants to be punished or hurt himself because of it and therefore uses Sasuke. Now I have four characters in your story that I feel sorry for; Itachi, Naruto, Aiko and Gaara.
And you asked for a suggestion at the bottom of the page, well, I would love if this fic turned into a ItaNaru, but since Naruto was suppose to meet someone that would peek his interest then that clearly states in won't become that way. ;( But if it can't be ItaNaru then I would like to suggest Deidara to be the one who Naruto will meet. Why? Well, because DeiNaru is a really unusual pairing and they're so cute together, two hot blue eyed blonds. So if it can't be ItaNaru can it be DeiNaru?
Though, these are mere suggestion, this is your fic and you're in charge, and even though I might not get as I have wished, I will still read the story because it's awesome.
Hoppas att du hade en trevlig p�sk och att du har tagit de lugnt och vilat ordentligt. �tit lite godis ocks� kanske? ;)
Tack f�r �nnu ett helt fantastiskt kapitel!
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=

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From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2009
First of all I really like this fic and I hope you'll update soom. Now second what about Gaara, what's his story and why did he hook up with Sasuke? Is it just sex for him too or does he really have feelings for Sas?
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From Narcoleptic86 on March 31, 2009
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

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From ANON - kc on March 30, 2009
Just read both My Boy Next Door and the first 5 chapters of For Better Or Worse. Enjoying the story so far on this one. Normally I would not try to influence or request an author to write their story a certain way, but...
PLEASE, PLEASE do not have Naruto "forgive" Sasuke and get back together with him. Sasuke is a total scum. Cheating on Naruto and then trying to shift the blame on everyone and everything else. He does not deserve to have someone like Naruto as a partner. Please allow Naruto to bring Itachi out of his depression (not necessarily as a love interest, but as a good friend/brother). Please let Itachi develope a relationship with his daughter, Naurto needs to point out that Anko loved him and that she would be very disappointed/pissed if he turned away from Aiko. Hope you post the next chapter fairly soon so I can read about what happens between Gaara and Naruto in the hallway. :)
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From ANON - ghia on March 30, 2009
oooohhhh, im gonna kill that bastard sasuke for hurting naruto!!!! in fact, let me kill him NOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!! i can't believe he can be a bastard that much!!! pleeeaasseeeee.... don't let naruto back together with him!!! he deserved someone better, itachi maybe??? yeah, why noT!!!! they can heal each other!!! please update sooner, i really cant wait to know, what the hell that bitch gaara doing in sasuke's room....... please update, please update sooner!!!!!! thank you very much for hearing my ranting.... oh, by the way, one of the best stories i've ever read...
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From ItaNarulover on March 30, 2009
OMG! O.O
That damn Sasuke-bastard, how dare he bring Gaara into his house when Naruto's there?! *fuming* He wanted to make Naruto "his" again, and this is the method he uses, inviting the person he cheated on Naruto with into their house? Is he out of his mind?!
.....And that was one evil cliffhanger by the way!.....Oh, well, perhaps I shouldn't be the one to judge you, because I used to do that as well. XD As earlier stated, cliffhangers are gifts to authors, but pure torment for readers.
Anyway...;).....You have no idea how happy I became when seeing that you've updated. I've anticipated this chapter for so long, and I can tell you that you have not disappointed me in the least. I loved it.
Poor Itachi, I'm afraid he might hurt himself if this continues, I hate to see him like this, if you know what I mean. My chest always hurts when I read the parts about him shutting himself in his office, drinking and refusing to talk to anyone, poor baby. *sniffles* And poor Ai-chan, Itachi better get better soon because she needs him and he needs her.
Anyway....thank you for another splendid chapter! I envy your skill and obvious talent. I can't wait for the next chapter, but I will patiently do so because there is not need for you to overexert yourself. Write because you want to and because you feel like doing it, not because you feel compelled to. You have to think about yourself, use your free time wisely, relax and rest, because you definitely deserve it. ;P
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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From ANON - Kurai Kisu on March 29, 2009
Oh you're KILLING ME!!! Please tell me Sasuke is really that big of an idiot in this story. I don't think my stomach can handle to angst. Does Gaara even like Sasuke. I thought he and Neji were trying to get into Naruto's pants. I must know what happens.
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From ANON - Chuu on March 29, 2009
So good! Plz don't tell me that Sasu was with Gaara again, if he was then he deserves to be hung! Awesome chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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From butterflies1974 on March 29, 2009
I Love this story. I had avoided until it had more than one chapter because I just knew it was going to be a good story and I really want to read more than one chapter. I am a selfish reader, I admit. You have not disappointed me, this story is great and I can't wait to read more.
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From arabuzumaki on March 29, 2009
ok wow that wasn't a cliff that was a BRICK WALL lol. does sasuke have a brain? what is the deal with him having gaara there?
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From tawanawelch on March 01, 2009
WOW!! I can picture the baby being adorable.*sighs* As angry as i was when Sasuke cheated on Naruto, i really want him to suffer a little bit longer and get back with Naruto while living together. I'd like to see Naruto tease him a bit too.(hehehe) Will Gaara be in the picture fighting to stay with Sasuke or will he just be gone altogether? Poor Itachi, i feel so bad for him. I hope it doesn't take too long b4 he snaps back to his old self. I can understand his feelings though. This was a good chapter. Heck, this story is really good.XDD I can understand that RL happened so it's quite alright as long as we all know u'll finish the story.:) Glad ur back.XD

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From ItaNarulover on March 01, 2009
Yay, you've updated!!! I've missed this story, a lot actually, so I'm really happy that you've updated. *sends freshly baked cookies, bone-crushing hugs and thousands of red roses by air*
And THANK YOU, for making the baby a girl, I was like "Yes!" (insert chibi with a fist in the air here) when I first read it.XD
Although that made me happy, the chapter itself made me sad. Poor 'Tachi, I feel so sorry for him. I hope that he will be able to heal and move on for his daughter sake, losing someone is extremely painful but he has to realize that he's not at fault and that his daughter needs him, his family needs him. After all, Anko would probably have wanted that.
And I thought it was selfish of Sasuke to get jealous of Aiko (loved the name by the way), just because Naruto comforted her. She probably hadn't been held yet and at that age touching is vital. I understand that he still loves Naruto but if he truly did then he wouldn't have cheated on him, there are no excuses since you always have a choice, you can chose not to cheat if you truly love your partner.
Anyway.....I started to ramble again..*sigh*....I'm such a weirdo...
Tack s� hemskt mycket f�r ett underbart kapitel! Ser fram emot de uppkommande!
Ta din tid och stressa inte f�r mycket bara f�r att galna fans vill ha en snabb updatering, du m�ste t�nka p� dig ocks� ;).
Ha det bra. Kramar =^_^=
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From MichiTheThird on December 06, 2008
I still don't feel any remorse for Sasuke. I feel bad for Itachi though, losing Anko before he ever got the chance to stop their drifting relationship. My heart was CRUSHED just as Naruto's was...hell, it was crushed for poor Naru's sake. Minato's going to kill Sasuke when he gets back...I have NO idea how Sasuke's going to make ammends for this. I also feel bad for Gaara. I want to know what happened to break him and Neji up...they're one of my favorite pairs. I'm LOVING the Kiba and Shino that's starting up. My Boy Next Door may have been a roller coaster, but this sequel is taking the cake. Can't wait for the next update!
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From UzumakiTheDobe on November 30, 2008
Omg, this story really makes you sad. I want to hate Sasuke (One part of me does, XD) but i really can't. And the end, god, Itachi must be soooo sad, it's hard to imagine his pain. After he had wanted a family so much, and then his wife dies giving birth to his first child. :'( I know what it means to loose someone, hell, i've lost 5 of my friends.

Hope you're feeling better! And if not, try not to die, please xD 'couse im not sure if i could stand not getting to know the end of this story! ^^

Much Love , Na-chan
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From sameyler on November 22, 2008
oh no how sad. dont tell me i think i know whats gonna happen.........
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