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Reviews for A Murderer in Training

By : sasukeskyuubi
  • From tawanawelch on October 07, 2008
    I love how you've set this up it's going to be fun and thrilling to read!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!!
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  • From ladygizarme on October 06, 2008
    wowwww dude, i like this a LOT! and not just because of the fact it's a mystery, and that is AWESOME! but also because i really like the style you wrote it in...like a mixture of a script and story format... it makes me think of those shows they have out at foellinger theater, yknow? when they have like, storytellers come and tell folky ghost stories in the fall (or they USED to..haven't been there forever..)

    ANYWAY! love the cabin names you came up with (lol..houselike things..i wondered if you meant cabins, but didn't even think it'd be for a new fic! lmao)
    the continued gag of shikamaru's head hitting the table is HILARIOUS to me, dude. especially the first one, though, since it was detailed out with the action/reaction (clunk! haha)
    and i KNEW naruto and sasuke's fighting was sexual tension lol. "i forgot something" mmhmmm, indeed, naruto *smirk* i do love me a bit of yummeh amidst the suspense.
    the flirting at dinner made me squeeee (though i had to strangle it, since the boys are in bed..which made it sound real funneh haha) it was so CUTE to me
    who is watching them?! is it... lol, stop..i'm channeling itachi nya...

    soooo, OMGCONTINUE!!! i really really like this, i need more! PLEASE?!

    &hearts

    ~ lg
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