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  • From Management on March 22, 2009
    I really wonder what Sasuke's up to!
    These were really good chapters. Everything from chapter two. Yeah, I haven't been here in a while. But they were good!
    Naruto is kind of confusing... He has really weird mood changes... Like more than can be normal or expected.
    Besides that, and you refusing to tell us what Sasuke is up to (meanie), it's all really awesome!
    So, I can't wait for the next chapter (hopefully before six months) and good luck writting it!
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - Capitu_ on March 05, 2009
    Thanx for a really nice story! The plot's good - so, which of them will fall in love faster?.. Please write more! Want to see Naruto learn his maths... poor boy.
    But it's not quite clear why their parents decided to marry them , because Naru's got no money. So why?..
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  • From butterflies1974 on January 17, 2009
    Can't wait to read more. I am very curious on how the story is going to progress.
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  • From ANON - Tansy Moon on January 17, 2009
    Great work love the story so far keep it up NE
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  • From deathbunnies on January 16, 2009
    sasuke falls for naru-chan right. i'll beat him up if he hurts naru-chan. -crosses arms and pouts-

    good update cant wait to read more.
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  • From Sabriel20 on January 10, 2009
    Ok, I think your story has a really good plot line and characterization. The writing lacks fluidity, but who's doesn't honestly. All in all, your writing style is good and captivating. You seemed to be screaming for some feedback, so I thought I'd oblige. Hopefully you don't think I'm mean and I haven't offended you. I also don't think that Naruto should drunkenly shout out his relationship with Sasuke. It reminds me too much of 10 things I hate about you, which is my own weirdness I guess. Anyway, its up to you. Its your creation, so I'll just wait patiently for your next update.
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  • From hisoka on January 03, 2009
    i cant tell if theyre confused or just exzorbed in their own worlds but this makes for a killer story.personally i hate the sent of smoke but i guess its okay it works for sasuke he seems to need some kind of addiction and nicotin is better than illegal drugs...sometimes.im just wondering kiba and the gangs reaction to sasuke knowing naruto.i dont really like the idea of naruto embarrassing himself and making an outcast of him self so soon so im not really for him getting drunk but im wondering if hell ever makes a friend of gaara,is gaara even in this?well whatever your choice ill continue to read
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  • From reamane21 on December 12, 2008
    i like what happens next.
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  • From tawanawelch on December 09, 2008
    Cool!! I like how Sasuke is in this he's someone I could befriend unlike other stories that have him cold and friendless. I also love that you have Shino and Choji even Lee in this as they are hardly ever used in fics with Sasu and Naru.:) I think Sasuke is addicted to smoking the way he analyzes it so closely it's funny and cute. Will Gaara be in this fic as a potential rival for Naruto's heart or well, I guess your story isn't quite like that. Anyway, I really like this story.
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  • From tawanawelch on December 09, 2008
    OMG!!!! What could Sasuke possibly want to tell Naruto? Maybe he wants to tell him not to say anything about their engagement or who to hang with and who not to. Well, I'm excited about this story and can't wait for the next update. I also like the history behind the names used in the school. You've got a great story here.:)
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  • From sameyler on December 09, 2008
    heh, nice update.
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  • From hisoka on November 06, 2008
    im surpried sasuke came to him to talk but its probably to tell him not to let anyone know about whats to happen between them,but i would have thought naruto would of stayed to finish his food at least but i guess he really wants sasuke acceptance.sakura and ino are gonna be crazy hopefully they dont get the info out of naruto about his ingagement.hope you can update soon
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  • From Management on November 04, 2008
    Yay! Good chapter!!!
    Poor Naruto. He's going to have to deal with Ino and Sakura. Always a scary thing. And explaining everything.
    Well, it was a good chapter. School souds kind of surreal... Bit of a Harry Potter fan aren't you? XD
    Thank GOd his roomie's Kiba. I was sitting there ansting as soon as he got his room, thinking it would be Sasuke.
    Can't wait for their conversation... So update soon!
    XD LANE
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  • From sameyler on November 01, 2008
    good update. lol. thats funny the whole hogworts thing.

    and it wAs a verry scarey halloween i saw my 260 pound friend in tidy whiteys. i didnt mean to walk in on him and now the image wont leave damn it. - make it go away-- cries-
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  • From Repanse on November 01, 2008
    Awesome! Please update soon!
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