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Reviews for Cardiac Arrest

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  • From sameyler on October 11, 2008
    i like it. its good hope ya update soon. please.
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  • From Daktalakpak on October 07, 2008
    ^^ aaah.. interesting... I am really looking forward to see what Naruto cooks up in order to get Sasuke to warm up, literally.
    I must admit my head is blank at this moment as I am way past the usual time I go to bed.
    Thank you for that response btw.
    Now I am going to bed. Zzz..
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  • From TheSimi on October 07, 2008
    It was really nice to get Naruto's POV in this chapter! I'm glad that he's smart, determened and self confident, I have a feeling that he's going to need his confidence when he have to deal with both school and Sasuke.

    Thank you so much for this chapter and I cant wait to read more!
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  • From Management on October 07, 2008
    Well, we can't have that! You being heartbroken...
    Ah, the betas! I'm one myself, and I know I'm more than a tad bit slow, so I don't blame your's... Pity, I wish I could. XD
    Well, I said it could only go one of two ways...
    You seem to have made it kind of intermediate. Somehow...
    How in the world did you manage THAT?
    And you're right! Long chapters will be greatly appreciated!
    XD Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From Management on October 06, 2008
    I like this story. The style's good, the character seems interesting and not OOC (well, not really. But you can't have him on the rampage trying to kill his brother, because that just makes it boring).
    I'll make you a deal. You update regularly, and I'll review eache chapter! If I'm there, which I usually am. I get the better end of the deal. And yes I know, sucks for you! XD
    I can't wait to meet Naruto... He's either completely into Sasuke and not at all. And at the moment, I can have no idea.
    Oh, all powerfull writter, tell us more!
    Okay, I have a cold, so this review might sound kind of weird, but most of my reviews do, especially when I like a story...
    Okay, well. I can't wait for the next chapter, so good luck with finishing it!
    XD LANE
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  • From Daktalakpak on October 06, 2008
    that was indeed short ^^ (I can't blame you, I write short chapters myself too so..) But good beginning!
    I'll look forward to see how this story will go on from here.
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  • From johartley on October 06, 2008
    hmmmm im intragued please update soon so i may know more
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  • From on October 05, 2008
    I think this is a good opening. You've introduced a few characters and set Sasuke's mood. I will be looking forward to chapter 2.
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  • From sweetangel23 on October 05, 2008
    ok...good story...now im just addicted...i know i know...already? right...update soon please..cant wait to see what happens

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  • From TheSimi on October 05, 2008
    This was a great first chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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