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Reviews for Pervert Unleashed

By : VFSNAKE
  • From darthme1011 on October 11, 2008
    which MILF there are lots of hot older naruto girls im hoping for tsume(kibas mom) cant wait for the next part
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on October 11, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From DragonMan220 on October 11, 2008
    If MILFs are the next thing coming I suggest a visit to Wave to have fun with Tsunami, she is hot!
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  • From serenagold on October 11, 2008
    Ha! Naruto uses the force to turn into a rapist. This is like the story of the invisible man, although I've never agreed with its concept that if you were no longer held responsible for your actions because you were invisible (or in this case, had the force) that mankind would turn to unmoral and criminal acts. Maybe Naruto should see Tsunande about having his mitachlorian levels reduced, cause all force business is making him no good.


    Keep up the good work. This is a silly concept for a story, but sometimes silly can be good. Although I some how think it would read better if instead of borrowing "the force" from Star Wars, you changed this very same power to some Kyuubi/Demonic based ability. The force is such a left wing concept that it takes you out of the story. Oh, and you should probably give credit in your disclaimer to Lucas, since this site tends to frown upon not giving credit where credit it due.
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  • From ANON - DarkenedNaruto on October 07, 2008
    Hey that was something else so a crossover between Star Wars and Naruto... Who would of thought that would be possible to do even though it turned out pretty good but there was something awkward about the characters
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  • From ANON - DarkestShadow22 on October 07, 2008
    THIS was great. I think I would doing more of a collection of one shots that are tied together, then the giant orgy of doom. It gets hard to keep up with twenty something women at once. I think that the first few chaps of your storys are great but all the characters muck thing up after a bit.
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  • From Pinkney on October 07, 2008
    I LOVE IT! Another great story from a great author! I cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - maki on October 07, 2008
    not bad....... for het. be hotter if it was yaoi thought ;P
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  • From ANON - blaquekitsune on October 06, 2008
    i like it and look forward to the up coming scenes. PS-Please son't put Sakura in it.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on October 06, 2008
    Hello VFSNAKEsan I must say that I deeply love your ideas. "The Force is strong with this one." Sorry I had to say that, and like many of your fans of your Harem stories I too have some Favorites or at least ideas, please listen. 1. Tsunade (I haven't seen her in one of your stories yet but Naruto with the Force and Kyuubi could do some cool age reductions you know and second she's beautiful and she loves Naruto as well. Second Shizune would jump in the split second she caught them or if they asked her to join.) 2. Isaribi (the fish girl from the Ocean arc) 3. Shion (the movie priestess) 4. Yukie (from the first movie) I thought all these girls have strong feelings for our favorite foxboy and second I think it would be pretty fun you know? Please keep up the great work and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2008
    This is awesome. Don't you DARE leave this story to turn stale. I only ask that you include every female in the Naruto series including Sakura. In fact please put her as the number two girl in Narutos heart after Hinata. Don't include Tsunade that is just sick and wrong. Unless you have Naruto use the force to make really her young again instead of just an illusion.
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  • From NarutoPhantom on October 05, 2008
    I loved it, so what other women will Naruto take besides Hinata, here's a list of most known Naruto ladies.

    Ino, Sakura, Tenten, Kin, Temari, Shion (Demon Country Priestess), Yukie (Snow Country Queen), Anko, Kurenai, Hana (Kiba's sister), Tsunade, Shizune and Hanabi (Hinata's sister).

    Please update soon, I would love to see what happens next to Naruto and whatever woman you set him up with next time.
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  • From on October 05, 2008
    good start.
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  • From deathwalker on October 05, 2008
    hurry this is really good
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  • From ANON - Raver 7 on October 05, 2008
    O my holy God in heaven on high, this story is pure gold! You would have to be an idiot of the highest order not to continue this story.

    By all means for the love of God you just have to bring out the next chapter as soon as you can.
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