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  • From wind797 on August 07, 2009
    please add sakura to this please i would like to see what naruto could do with her
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  • From ANON - NARUTO LOVER on August 07, 2009
    a good chapter, but i still would lke to see a new chapter of ED.
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  • From ANON - DB on August 06, 2009
    You write great erotic tales from the Naruto verse!!

    thanks and update this story and "Establishing Dominance" ASAP please!

    Thanks again.

    DB
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  • From ANON - Killer Wolf on July 23, 2009
    Awesome story, I hope Naruto gets to Kurenai pretty soon!
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  • From Takai153 on June 02, 2009
    Nice! Lemons could be a bit longer though. Never can be long enough. How about doing Tsume and Hana together next? Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - ananamuse on May 19, 2009
    have a Inuzuka threesome on the next chap
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  • From ANON - HeartStar on May 19, 2009
    I love this story so far I just started reading it and I plan to read more but I have a question This is the first time I have tried, How and where on this site do I go if I am trying to find a story ?

    I am trying to find a story in the Naruto area where Naruto is tricked into using Sexy neo jituse and is then raped by all the main character men and then is stuck in that form. Also I tryed to sign up for the forum and it asked for a authors address but I do not know what that is and couldn't complete the registery for the forums

    Lara

    Lara_Wakim@yahoo.com
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  • From GhostwriterMO on May 18, 2009
    My first pick is Tayuya, she survived her encounter with Temari and after recovering descides to get pay back on Naruto and his friends for her humiliating defeat. So she sneaks back into Konoha with stealth but Naruto's connection to the force alerts him to her. So when Naruto catches her and takes her to her "new home" at his apartment/sex dungeon no one knows and cares except, what Naruto wants with her. (evil chuckle), Or my second choice the fish girl Isaribi gets her transformation stabilized that she looks human or can transform into her aquatic form at will. Wanting to "thank" Naruto for his kindness she moves into his apartment complex and well Naruto sinces her desire, and Naruto decides to have some sushi with plenty of juice for dinner with her (whip cream chocolate and cherrys for desert yummmy). Or better yet both it's up to you so (gets on hands and knees)PLEASE PICK THEM FOR NARUTO's NEW PLAYMATES PLEASE!!!! Keep up the great work and it's good hearing from you agiain!
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  • From Intelligo on May 18, 2009
    "Damn straight Hinata-chan. Just like Anko-chan, who is my sexy psycho snake bitch that loves my cock just as much as you do, and wants to be fucked relentlessly by me," said Naruto, as he loved hearing the girls moan beneath him, and loved fucking them like this.

    I would say get a beta, but I don't think you can "fix" writing like this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2009
    I have been one to go for Ayame or Shizune. But i would really to see what would happen to Konan, the female member of Atasuki.
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  • From Yamizenchou on May 18, 2009
    I'm thinking Naruto eats at Ichiraku's and leaves his tip inside Ayame. Or perhaps showing Tenten how to polish a sword.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on May 18, 2009
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From naruto86 on May 18, 2009
    Another great chapter I can't wait to see how he gets them all knocked up especially Tsume considering she's a mother and I wonder who else he will add to his growing family.
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  • From kalavera on May 18, 2009
    Thank you for the update you are a genius when it comes to fic`s like this one, okay while the lates chapter was a little short it`s in a good way. here are some ideas of mine that could be for some future fic`s, if you like them or not its you`re choice anyway:

    1-Naruto Bible Black crossover
    2-pokegirls
    3-Dead O Alive Xtreme volleyball(naruto invites the girls to his island)
    also here are some of the characters you could use:

    Tsume
    Hana
    Hinata
    Tsunade(reverse age jutsu)
    Ino
    Temari
    Yugao
    Kurenai
    yoshino (shikas mom)
    Kyuubi female
    Nibi Female
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  • From ANON - chief1029 on May 18, 2009
    I think Sakura should be next. With the power of the force, Naruto can open Sakura's eyes to her undying love and devotion to him. I'm sure you can come up with something for her, as long as she's in the harem.
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