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Reviews for Coming Up F'in Roses

By : Shaylilin
  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2020

    hey can I be in  your story


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  • From Ayana on March 21, 2011
    oh my fucking gosh..I am on the edge of my seat with this story. @-@ please tell me you will continue writing it..!?!
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  • From ANON - Tyai on April 27, 2009
    Awww, I'm glad those two got together.
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  • From oliversangel on April 26, 2009
    Oh you know I will wait for your updates. I can't help it, I am addicted to your stories. ^.^ Is Nar really going to be a stripper? LOL. I can only imagine him dancing around a pole. LOL. And I had a good laugh picturing Dei Dei in a shirt and tie. LOL. I wonder what kind of mischief he is going to get into there? And OMG you HAVE to put in a warning if you're going to put in something funny like the ninja-turtles line. You are *so* lucky I hadn't drunk anything, or you would be in big trouble missy!! LOL. It was nice seeing Madara as a human for a hot second like that with Haku, but as you told me, and as I am guessing, he will inevitibly fuck it up. I can't wait to read more of all your stories, and if I were a lesbo too, I would totally be yours too!!

    XXOO
    Ero
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 25, 2009
    Wow, Haku actually soften the old bastard's heart... but not enough to leave Itachi and co. alone though. Hopefully now that Madara's with Haku, Madara won't be chasing after Naruto.
    Madara's been living his playboy life for a long time so I'm not sure that he's able to stay completely faithful to Haku. Especially since he's already stated that he feels lust for others, it's not that big of a step to go from lust to the bedroom with Madara.
    Quick question though: Itachi will be dealing and Naruto will be what? Stripping? I can't see Itachi keeping his cool if Naruto ends up doing that, esp. around some of the more zealous clubbers.
    Anyway, great chapter. I really love this story.
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  • From ANON - Vee on April 25, 2009
    Aw, it sounds like you've been going through alot of stuff in real life D:

    Anyway I LOVED the newest chapter, update when you can!! Madara's really a sneaky bastard! Poor sasuke, itachi and naruto, I'm glad itachi said that he and no one that he knew would use any of what madara's selling ^_^
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  • From tawanawelch on April 25, 2009
    OMG!!! Sai is What??!! This is so Cool!!! I truly wasnt expecting that and i love the surprise. I especially looove the Hidan/Sai pairing. Man, u come up with some good ones Jade.:D Im so glad the bros. have someone on both sides watching them. I can totally understand Sai wanting to be the one to beat Sasuke cuz he can do it just right w/o much harm,thank goodness:)
    Boy oh boy what Madara would do if he ever found Sai out. I hope Sai and Kakashi can get together:)

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  • From ANON - Chibi on March 22, 2009
    Awesome story, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Vee on February 12, 2009
    Hahah wow I totally take back what Ive said about Sai!

    And the story is really amazing :D
    Update soon pleasee
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  • From oliversangel on January 29, 2009
    Oh YAY!!! When I started reading this chapter, and realized what was going on with Sai, I cheered!! Honestly. I'm so glad he's a good guy. You have no idea. Poor buddy having to dose Naruto, and beat up his cousin and stuff. I feel so bad for him. I LOVE the Sai/Hidan pairing, but I admit, my heart broke for him, when Hidan was talking/thinking about what he had to do for him to make him feel better. I can only imagine what that must feel like for him, and how hard it is for him to maintain his cover, and I can't help but be worried about him now, playing all sides like this. Madara is not a man to be trifled with, and I know if/when he ever finds out, Sai will be in deep shit, but I know that Hidan will protect him though. I love how Hidan was just as foul-mouthed, yet a bit of a softy for Sai. So sweet. I miss him terribly, since Shika blew him to bits, so it was nice to "see" him again. :) I'm glad your muse had a "nice" plan for him, but I don't trust her enough to think that poor Sai is going to walk away from this unscathed. *sigh* I'm on the edge of my seat here, hanging on by an eyelash, wondering what's going to happen next. I can't wait to read more. :) XXOO
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 28, 2009
    The twists and turns in your story keep getting better and better. You've turned a most hated character into someone who we could sympathize with. Very cool. Although now the nagging feeling in the back in my mind is this: how long can Sai keep this up? Because he is human and humans make mistakes. In this case, the mistakes would have catastrophic results, like death at the hand of an angry drug lord.
    Your writing is wonderful. Keep going!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 16, 2009
    You're not going to lose me due to Madara's actions; I enjoy a good villian. I just want Itachi and Naruto to have a safe and stable relationship so badly because they're so perfect for each other (even though the angst makes the happy ending that much more sweeter)! Just take my outrage at Madara as a compliment to your great ability as a writer to affect your readers!
    Awesome chapter! I just hope Sasuke will be okay!
    Keep going!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 16, 2009
    OMG!!! Now with the Hyuuga name Madara sees huge dollar signs. He's going to bring everyone down. Haku knows Madara so well. A testimont to his love for him. He totally knows a side no one else knows. Awww.:)
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  • From ANON - Vee on January 15, 2009
    Ack!
    I HAAATE Sai!!

    Evil bastard >:o
    But other than that, I LOOOOVE this story. Can't wait for the next update >__>
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  • From oliversangel on January 14, 2009
    Oh, I almost forgot. When Iruka caught Itachi with the pain killers and water, and he was all red faced, asking if he was interrupting, coffee came out of my nose, and I sprayed my computer screen. That was funny. Iruka is so sweet, and understanding. And I am glad that even though he knew Itachi was into drugs before, he allowed him to see Naruto, and it just shows how much Itachi loved him, and wanted to be with him, by submitting to the drug tests. I can't say it enough, but I love seeing Itachi this way, and I can't get enough of of this pairing. Hmmm, when Sasuke gets out of the hopsicle is Anko going to nurse him back to health? *wiggles eyebrows* Oh, and poor Hinata, and Neji. I am ascared for them. *pouts* XXOO
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