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By : Shaylilin

From oliversangel on January 14, 2009
Awww, poor Nar. At least Anko is there. I knew that Madara wouldn't have Sai beat up his own nephew. So thank goodness, he said so, but still, I don't think I like him anymore. Well, kinda, but he is a bad bad bad man. ^.^ I think it's awesome that Kakashi is a detective. I think if he were real, that would be what his job was. He is perfect for it. ^.^ Poor Sasuke. Poor everyone. The shit is really starting to hit the fan eh? I love all your stories, and I know I said that "Crazy is relative" is my fav, but this one comes a close second, hell, I can't make a choice, you're just awesome all around. ^.^ I'm kinda bummed that Temari and Gaara are bad here. But I love the fact that Ino and Sakura are such sluts. LOL. I don't know, there is something about them, I just don't like them really. Ino is just a bitch, and Sakura is stupid cause she ignored Naruto all this time, and was all moony over Sasuke, until recently. Now she's starting to finally see how great Naruto is. Sort of off topic I know, just had to rant. ^.^ Still haven't watched last weeks episodes cause Jason is dumb, and we are gonna have more soon. Oh well, it will be a Naruto/Bleach orgy. Great chapter, as always, I can't wait for more. Your muse really is on kind of the mean side isn't she? LOL. So is mine. ^.^
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From tawanawelch on January 02, 2009
OMG!!! Madara is so underhanded to have an employee do his dirty work and slip Naruto a mickey in an innocent glass of water. No one would ever suspect. Damn, Madara is one determined, devious bastard.:) His plans of course are extremely selfish with the initial part being Money, but the ultimate part being Naruto to satisfy that sexual addiction he has. How despicable!! *head down,looksup maniacally and twists hands together* Muwahahahahaaaaaa, I love it!!!!!! I like his longing for Haku but he will have to give up something for him, nice. I feel really scared for the Hyuuga clan in this now that Madara has his sights set on a new plan.
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From tawanawelch on December 29, 2008
I was so in the moment when Naruto and Itachi had to tell Iruka about the drug thing. I was scared for them cause I could see Iruka being angry as hell and forbidding them from being together. I'm glad Itachi decided to give Naruto the ring beforehand. I'm glad everything turned out well for them anyway.:) Poor Iruka will he survive Naruto becoming more and more independant? Yaaay!!! Neji's in it!!!!! Naruto must've enjoyed the feeling of the drug to be going to Madara's club sans Itachi. He was also showin' off a bit for Neji wasn't he? Madara is making me nervous about his plan to 'employ' Naruto and his own nephew.:(
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From tawanawelch on December 29, 2008
LMAO about Gai. That was so funny when Naruto said something about thanking someone for the mercy fuck and that they should be sent a basket for it. I died laughing off of that!!!!! You're so funny!!!! I love the closeness of the 3 of them. They can talk to eachother about anything and everything even if it's hurtful or heartfelt. They really are a family. I'm glad to see Sasuke not being left out. I like Anko for Sasuke, never would've thought about that pairing. I love Sai in this he's so totally wicked. The smack from Madara was a riot. I could so picture that happening.
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From tawanawelch on December 29, 2008
Yaay!!! Naruto had a wonderful night with his Boyfriend now lover. That was one HOT SMEX scene. Naruto was so anxious for it to happen. Wow! Itachi did drugs before so now Madara will think it easy to lure him back and get Naruto to boot. Bad Madara!!!!
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From ItaNarulover on December 28, 2008
It's just keeps getting better and better.
I'm excited to see what Madara plans to do.
And the fluff with Itachi and Naruto, it's so cute. *squeals like a fangirl*
But I'm really starting to get worried about Naruto though, he'll get addicted unconsciously. Poor 'Tachi.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

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From ZenithB on December 26, 2008
so good. More please!!! XD
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From ANON - qwerty on December 25, 2008
Holy crap! Devious is too weak a word for Madara!
Argh! I can't believe he's deliberately trying to get Naruto hooked! What a loser!
And Haku! I can't believe he would cheat on poor innocent Hinata. She'll be so crushed!
I noticed that Haku didn't mention her last name to Madara. I just have a feeling that Madara is going to create even more twisted plans when he finds out Hinata's a Hyuuga. Yes, Haku said that she's a partner to a multi-million company but there are a lot of rich companies out there!
Anyway, great chapter. Loved it! Keep going!

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From oliversangel on November 29, 2008
Seriously SB? And you post anonymous so no one can see if you have written anything? Dude, Jade Rose is the queen of Naruto slash. If it makes you feel inadequate, sorry for you..next time grow some balls and post when you're logged in or under your pen name, especially whem flaming. ^.^
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From ANON - SB on November 29, 2008
you really don't know how to write guys.
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From ANON - zen_with_me on November 28, 2008
very very good...can't wait to read more
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From oliversangel on November 26, 2008
Damn, how did I miss two chapters? I honestly check at least a couple times a day for updates. ^.^ Anhywho, I knew once I read 'belly shirt' that it was Sai, but I would never have expected him to do that. Did Madara punish him? Oh, and speaking of Madara, holy fuck woman!! He is one depraved man. Is it wrong that I like it? LOL. Poor Naruto, getting dosed like that though, at least he didn't freak out, and give himself a massive anxiety attack. *looks around whistling innocently* The promise ring was sweet, I love reading about Itachi in a sweet and loving way. He and Naruto are so cute together. And I am also glad Iruka didn't freak out on them. Naruto going to Madara's place made me worried, and then Itachi calling just as Naruto left.....*dramatic music* The angst, and whatnot is coming up soon isn't it? Well, as I have been 'reading' you for awhile now, I know that your muse isn't entirely mean. Well hopefully not anyways. LOL. Can't wait for more, I was actually thinking about this story last night wondering when you were going to update it, and I got a two-chapter suprise orgy!! Woo-hoo!! XXOO
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From ANON - qwerty on November 26, 2008
I wonder what Itachi has on his mind... and Madara is going to be devious, I can tell.
Great chapter!
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From ItaNarulover on October 29, 2008
Hehe, I'm dying in a good way, so don't worry, besides I think I'm starting to become quite cat-like.. nine lives and all...hmm...XD
Anyway, this chapter totally rocked! The thing with Gai was hilarious, because I agree, who would want to sleep with him? ;P haha
And as usual Itachi and Naruto are so cute together..this is heaven for me right here...oh, the fluff...
And I really liked that you paired Sasuke up with Anko, because if it were Sakura, Ino or Karin I'd probably barf...ugh..*shivers* Anko's really cool, and I think that she and Sasuke make a really nice couple, so thanks for that! ;)
And I kinda like Madara, yes, he's a horny druggie, but I find him rather amusing...;P
I'm starting to get a bit worried about Naruto though, I think he might get addicted. But I guess that's one of the bigger events/plots of this fic am I right? But since Naruto got Itachi and Sasuke, I guess that whatever may happen, they'll be there for him to help him out, hopefully. Anyway, I'm totally speculating too much....sorry....I tend to do that... ^///^
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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From ItaNarulover on October 17, 2008
Holy shit, the lemon! *drooled to death * , *got powers enough to write a review before passing away* ItaNaru forever! Kyaa!
It's just keeps getting better and better,*squeal*, although I suspect that it's a twist to it. Like Naruto is starting to get interested in drugs, and that might not end up that well...hmm...
I really like Sasuke in this fic, he's so adorable! And Itachi is too! And Naruto! *died yet again but this time from too much fluff-ness*
Damn, I wonder how many times I'll die from reading and reviewing your fic ;P Keep it up!
Can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

(sorry for acting like a hyper 6 year old, I usually get like this when I'm high on sugar or ItaNaru-ness ;p I hope it didn't bother you too much..)

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