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Reviews for The Writing on the Wall

By : ladygizarme
  • From FireflyLeo on April 17, 2011
    I love this. I'm not usually one for alternate universe stories but I really like this one. Very innovative and you're developing the relationships between the characters like a pro. Please update this!!!
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  • From bloodshound on September 22, 2010
    off to a great start here. looking forward to more
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  • From serenagold on June 02, 2010
    Everyone is finally coming together!
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  • From ANON - Solo on June 01, 2010
    Fantastic chapter!
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  • From Houseki on May 27, 2010
    Wo~ot!! So glad you've been working on this again. It seemed like forever since the last time you worked on it (not that I have any room to talk ^^;;)

    The opener was fun... in a weird, gross, fun way XD I feel SO bad for Sasu, but you definitely torment him well. I'd probably feel worse if it was Naru, so I guess better Sasu then?? *cough*

    I like the way you went with his interaction with his Uncle this time around. Makes you feel sad for him too, with him apparently trying to tell Sasu his Aunt was in trouble.

    Shika didn't get much play in this chap, but it was cute, him looking all around for Minato and coming to a somewhat conclusion about his relation with Naruto. Can't wait to see more of him in the next chap!

    Naru/Saku banter is fun ^_^ Definitely two best friends. how Sakura is still on her diet cuz she didn't order the fries XDDD Oh Sai... lol

    During Sasuke's time at work, that was a really down moment too. Him getting his call from his Aunt. You can just imagine how he felt and looked. Then Naru showing up and scaring the living daylights out of him and Naru being completely oblivious and Naru and his one-track mind! MANGAMANGAMANGA! lol

    Glad Naru took the initiative to take Sasu to see his aunt ♥ Things are moving along quite nicely!

    Is the next chap ready for beta'ing???? HURRRRRY!!!

    ♥ya!
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  • From jessysuki on May 27, 2010
    Hey! Love your fic, it really has a plot, not just a excuse for smut, wich happens a lot and I am so envolved with the storie. I have some teories abou what seems most evident though I am a little puzlled about other, like why ghost appear to Sasuke in a much more gruesome way than to Shikamaru. What else has Naruto sensibility inform? Minato was a detective and Itachi and Sasuke's dad are cops so I imagine some relation beteween them. Can't wait to read more! I am really loving your fic!
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  • From zandam88 on May 27, 2010
    Great story :) I love your Naruto and I can't wait to see what he will do next or would he met his mother ? :) I hope, you'll write next chapter soon, and thank you for that story :)
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  • From 7mizu8 on May 27, 2010
    Ahhh! I'm so glad you finally updated! I really like this story. You make sasuke's discomfort seem so tangible. It's really uncomfortable to read those parts, which i think is great. Sasuke has never been my favorite character in any story, but his parts are the most striking. I really enjoy reading about shika and naruto, though. I like naruto's "hand power" hehe Can't wait for the threesome! That is if you're still planning on writing such a situation?
    Thanks for the Story!!
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  • From jessysuki on May 26, 2010
    Oh My God! I just read the first chapter but am totaly hooked already! Love it! The misterie, the supernatural, the characters... It will be hard to concentrate on work now...
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  • From inuspike on May 25, 2010
    You updated! Yay! I had almost forgotten this story and when I saw it on the front page I was super excited. So much suspense, so much drama, so much ESP going off. ^^ Can't wait to see what you have in mind for the boys. And, please I beg of you, be nice to Itachi. *holds out hands pleadingly* Pretty please??
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  • From ANON - Nami on May 25, 2010
    Yaaay!!! (Yes, this story warrants three exclamation points it's that awesome) You're continuing! I love this story, for reals. I can't wait to see all three boys interacting now. And ahaha, poor Sasuke XD. That he hasn't dead fainted every time is amazing. And his poor uncle ;.;. He's sorry that you have the misfortune of getting none of the nice bits of ghosts like Shika (I still find it amusing that Shika would have just had a lovely chat with him and asked for tea he couldn't drink before calmly explaining what's wrong). Awww, he was probably trying to tell him about his aunt.

    And poor Naruto XD. It sucks to be a daddy almost clone XD. All the hot guys you meet keep thinking you're a ghost and staring at you in suspicion or flipping out, crouching and huddling up in corners like frightened kittens. I can't wait for the next chapter~!
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  • From ANON - dragon on May 25, 2010
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Prism0467 on May 25, 2010
    Welcome back.
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  • From ANON - Kitty on March 23, 2010
    I can't wait until the next chapter, things are really going to start to get interesting now.
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  • From Prism0467 on March 20, 2010
    I'm happy to know you haven't given up on this story.
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