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By : ladygizarme
  • From Dragon7 on October 29, 2008
    I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
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  • From serenagold on October 29, 2008
    Great chapter... although I was a bit confused at the end there when Itachi scared Sasuke. Was it still part of the dream or did Itachi really go all Temple of Doom on him? (lol Indiana Jones reference for the win!)

    Keep up the great work. I always enjoy reading this. ^^
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  • From vashta on October 27, 2008
    Very nice! This is just spellbinding, I can't wait for more!

    Vashta
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  • From Telpei on October 26, 2008
    Ahhh! I absolutely love this story! It's amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next. I have so many questions! Will Sasuke ever tell Shikamaru that he sees ghosts? What will happen when Sasuke sees Naruto again? What's with the dead ghost that looks like Naruto? How will Shikamaru react when he sees Naruto and notices that he looks like the ghost? Howcome the ghost felt like he knew Sasuke from before?? What is going to happen???? Haha ^_^;; This story has a fabulous plotline, and the characterizations are great too. I love how you've kept with the Naruto storyline somewhat, by making Tsunade the publisher and a gambler, and having the council involved. Basically I just love everything about this story ^_^ Please update soon, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From Dragon7 on October 25, 2008
    !! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
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  • From ANON - laura on October 24, 2008
    OMG XD

    im confuseddd :( but i really love this >< poor sasuke. UPDATE SOON!
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  • From LindyStar on October 23, 2008
    This is an excellent story! I'd love to have you inform when you update -> montanawildhack@2die4.com

    Your writing style is clear but descriptive and the story line is very intriguing!
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  • From Shaylilin on October 23, 2008
    Poor Sasuke again. He goes from seeing an actual human to seeing a ghost and not knowing there was a difference.
    I'm happy Naruto got Shikamaru's manuscript looked at by Tsunade.
    I can't wait until they get together.
    I kind of wish that Sasuke and Shikamaru would just realize how they feel (and then admit it).

    I'm so excited when I see this story is updated. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ren on October 23, 2008
    Shika would at least venture to say he hadn’t seen a ghost look so traumatized since his father had walked through that little girl when he was a child.
    i would think having someone walk through you..WOULD be traumatizing.
    someone he used to know? oooooooooh! awesomeness!
    nyaaaa sweet dream dude.. that would scare the ultrapiss outta me..
    awwwwww poor sasuke is so confused.. *wipes the dripping sarcasm out of my voice* but really *cough*
    Or, in his case, someone who liked looking their best—and that included avoiding the public humiliation of having a panic attack in an open gym.
    "your so vain...i bet you think this fic is about you..."
    its hilarious, i cannot see sasuke lifting weights.. it actually cracks me UP...Scrawny McScrawnerton of Scrawnyville Ohio..
    mmmmmmm Itachi cop.... coptachi....hotness.
    wooooooooooot i love the sasuke ghost visits.. they are so graphic and scary
    That smell of death and decay; that taste of blood and rot; that wet, rattling sound of bloody lungs desperately trying to squeeze every last drop of air out of and into their starving alveoli.
    awesome line dude...
    its funny, cause i was thinking "he remembered to grab his wallet?" while sasu was in the 7-11...and then you said that he didnt. woot for details.
    *giggles at Tsunade's prowess*
    Danzou...bastard.
    Yosh!!! they are gonna publish Shika's story wooooot!
    naruto is going to handle shika huh? *smirk* hot.
    that is freakin awesome dude.
    *has a hard time imagining a bubbly shikamaru*
    ITACHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII yatta!!!! *heartyheart*
    omt awesome ending! dude.. sweet. i loved it. i had to read the last part over and over just to get the whole effect.
    itachi.. awesome.
    i CANT WAIT for the next chapter!!! hurry up and write the damn thing...with more scaretachi onegai.
    love love
    ren
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  • From Houseki on October 22, 2008
    ohhhhhh pooooooor blond dead guy! he was srsly shaken up! nande nande?! love that even shika is a bit alarmed at this turn of events. speaking of shika.. woohoo on getting published! and, gotta love that he realized after getting off the phone with naru that HE should be the one getting excited, not the editor :p

    speaking of naru... LOVE him and tsunade together! omg tsunade had me crackin up with the whole 'dating' thing lmao.. gah old farts getting in the way of things even at the Leaf?! *sigh* Tsunade, pound them in the ground! ^__^ But yeah, oh and then Naru FORGETTING the damn 'script *rolls eyes* VERY naru btw ^__^ lol

    and then, me... i mean, Sasuke. He pulled the short-stick, didn't he? Guy has got the WORST of this whole thing! I mean, I don't mind all the screen time he's getting, but, he's about to have himself a damn coronary at this rate! First having the nightmare about naruto.. or the ghost.. and then having that bloody gory thing at his bathroom door.. then wtf was up with itachi?! Aiyaa! I liked the mangenkyou mind-set you gave with the dream. Very cool... the green threw me off, until it hit me you are going in negative.. suppose that's why nya? lol and what about his dad and ma and aunt and hmmmmmm yus yus I see now, yus I believe I see your madness finally. nfufufu

    Ya... so... I luvs it. You know I do ^__^ This whole idea was fun and crazy and I is happy to be apart of it and along for the ride ^__^

    Big hugs and kisses yo!!

    Me
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  • From gilliath on October 22, 2008
    Poor Sasuke, he's really getting freaked. I can understand why though, feeling ghosts is more than scary enough for me at times. But I do keep wondering why the heck Sasuke gets all the scary ones, and Shika only gets the nice ones?
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  • From ANON - o0SilverKyuubi0o on October 15, 2008
    eh??? are you saying Naru-chan died?! Noooo!!
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  • From serenagold on October 10, 2008
    This was a really good chapter and I really enjoyed it. I just love how Naruto and Sasuke met. Although, Sasuke's unsuccessful chase after the blond was kind of creepy. I wonder what it means that his hand went through him and that he had a vision of the blond all bloody and dead. Perhaps, unlike Shikamaru, maybe Sasuke isn't seeing actual ghosts at all!! Maybe he's just freaking crazy and needs some medication to take care of his Schizophrenia. O_O


    Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From vashta on October 09, 2008
    I'm so excited. I have a hunch that I know where all of this is going and I want to ask so bad, but if I'm right I don't want to spoil it for anyone else, I also don't want to know if I'm right! Does that make sense? ANYWHO! I'm just tickled to death with your characterization, I can see the scenes play out in my mind and picture the facial expressions. Great job!

    Vashta
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  • From ANON - CkA on October 09, 2008
    This is outstanding! You've got me on the edge of my seat. My son reads Deathnote, I'll have to try it noe. Thanks! UNIQUE for aff.
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