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Reviews for The Writing on the Wall

By : ladygizarme
  • From ANON - PhantasumFantasy on March 14, 2010
    ^.^ Please keep up the good work! I love the story you've created...can't wait for the next chapter to come! I want to know how Shika's going to react lol!
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  • From ANON - Amelia on March 11, 2010
    Excellent story, completely keeping me guessing! And the characters are all so wonderfully in, well, character. My one criticism is you should work on the principle of "show not tell." For example, when you just told the reader that Sakura was a nurse working to pay for medical school, you could have just showed us that through the story.

    I would like to join your mailing list for updates!

    Thanks,
    Amelia
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  • From lovel3ssangel on February 11, 2010
    Wow! I'm really enjoying this and I cant wait for more, i read all of your chapters in a few hours :) Very nice plot.
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  • From OokamiJudge on November 21, 2009
    Sooo Naru's dad? *snickers* poor Sasu being tormented by Naru and his 'ghost counter part' gotta feel sorry for him. Hmmm though the way his dead uncle's ghost is almost makes it seem like he was murdered or somethin. Hmm eitehr way interesting so far how to see more :)
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  • From ANON - Tsuki Akuma on September 13, 2009
    I would absolutely love it if you could e-mail me when you update. It's not often I find an awesome story like this on AFF, and this is actually the first time I've reviewed on here. I only review on FF, since I only have an account there, but I felt like I just HAD to be added to your update list (otherwise I would have saved this somewhere and then forgotten about it, only coming back to it months and months later).

    My e-mail is rinxandxkinx12@aim.com (dificult, I know D:).

    Thank you,
    Tsuki
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 23, 2009
    I've always thought this couple balanced well.Fine, fine scene here,I'm seeing this like a movie but better.thats why we read no?Hawt and smart.
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  • From ANON - Mina on January 06, 2009
    If I was Sasuke, I would be crying everyday. No seriously. That or like.... attached to someone near to me. I would become an entity that lives glued to Shikamaru's arm, and when I need to go somewhere else and Shika needs to go some place different, much like a hermit crab finding another shell, I would find another body to be latched to and go.

    But, yes. I love this story, even if I may get NIGHTMARES, OMG WTF IS THAT THING IN SASUKE'S APARTMENT D8!?
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  • From CassandraIncognito on November 30, 2008
    I adore this story. Honestly, if I were you I'd attempt to get this published... hopefully you'll end up as lucky as Shika.

    Mind you'd have to change the character names.
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  • From serenagold on October 31, 2008
    Hahaha.. awesome!! I was always just assuming that the ghost was Deidera, what with the criminal record or what not. I never assumed it to be Minato! >:D (Note: I still could be wrong. ^^)


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From 7mizu8 on October 30, 2008
    Yay! they finally meet!
    I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
    hmm I think I know what's going on but i'll just have to wait and see if I'm correct. I'm excited
    thanks for the awesome story ^_^
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  • From gilliath on October 30, 2008
    Aha! I think I see what's going on here! Amazing:D
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  • From smellysocks on October 30, 2008
    Yep yep yep! Very very interseting... Is it Naruto's father? (I'm asking this as I think 'well... obviously...')
    Thanks!
    -smelly
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  • From Prism0467 on October 29, 2008
    I'm confused.
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  • From hikarichan20 on October 29, 2008
    YaY am so excited for the newwwwww chapter! The plot is thickening!!! I can't wait till what I think is going to happen happens xDDDD But if it doesn't I will be pleasantly surprised!
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  • From Houseki on October 29, 2008
    Nyaaaaaaaaa Sasukeeee!!!! He hurt himself! *cries* He srsly like, just needs to um... not move, ever. That fall could not have felt good -____- What's this? Why is his uncle calling his aunt's name?? Hmmmmm???? Odd... and how perceptive of his ma... he is her lil boy after allllll ^__^

    Yay Naru and Saku!! Sakura definitely has patience for Naruto... one would after all those yrs knowing each other. Cute how she is so medically incline that everything she does is related to it.. funneh! And yeah.. I can totally understand Naru's need to not want to go back to something so mundane as reading story after story after story... especially if most are BORING!! or AWFUL!! or WHATEVER!! >.>

    And then.... SHIKA!!!!!!!! He gets to meet Naruuuuu orrrrrrr the ghost? WTF?! OMG?! AHHH! *ahem* Well, that was a very rude way to greet his new editor.. but I'm sure he'll make up for it later on, ne? Ne?! teehee

    LOVE IT! YOU KNOW IT!! Keep it up tomotan! Love ya!

    Me
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