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Reviews for Payback is a Bastard

By : lexjamandme
  • From lara5170 on September 07, 2015
    Very fluffy and very good. I could almost picture the actual 'picture' that was described with the Princess on the ground and Sasuke attacking the Prince.
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  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on August 17, 2009
    i love your fluffy heart!!!!!!!!!!! kawai!!!!!!!!! thank you thank you thank you!!! i cant take all this angsty ness blech lol and i woves your sense of humore she fluttered her fake eyelashes so hard they caused a change in the wind current lol hehehehe and i wanna picture too!!!
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on May 29, 2009
    ...Oh, how I love your fluffy little heart. You write the sweetest stories ever.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 27, 2009
    I love every story of yours that I read...but this one...I don't think I've ever laughed out loud before! Oh my goodness, the mirth!!! It was so wonderful! I could chalk it up to it being 8 am and having not slept for 36 hours, but I think I'll blame it on the story. It's a small world aaaaafffterall!
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  • From ANON - Lee on January 06, 2009
    This one was really good (and I don't just mean the lemon ;D ). Based on this and some of your other fics, I like your style of writing and look forward to seeing more submissions from you.
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  • From ANON - Yuri on October 11, 2008
    Um...Can i say tht this is the hottest, sexiest and cutest story i have ever read. Never mind the stupid rides...although i would love to see Sasuke trying to mentally kill himself...but my god the sex afterward was amazing! I think i need a very cold shower now.
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  • From sameyler on October 08, 2008
    omg that was so awsome, funny sweet and hot.lol
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  • From Lechan on September 30, 2008
    Great one-shot. it made me grin a sqirm and well, it was grea. I have to say the best part was the "Its a small world" part. I was crying picturing Sasuke ready to attempt drowning himself or naruto in two feet of water, and then when Naruto snuggled him and Said I love yoU... ^-^ Sasuke's reaction just made me melt. I love your writing style because of its fluffy/hot/funniness so thanks for writing this. I always look for your stuff and it gives me inspiraion to rite my own. ^-^ Loved it.


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  • From ANON - Avonne on September 29, 2008
    God, you are SO awesome!

    My teeth are rotting from the fluff, but it's the best excuse i could imagine going to my dentist with!! And i liked the whole amusement park idea, i cracked up at the end with the image of sasuke getting soak and wet on a water ride and Naruto being perfectly dry. I bet his face getting off the ride was just so...Sasuke!

    Another lovely story for the books, mich!! How i love my boys in so much love!! Thanks for sharing!!
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  • From UzumakiLover on September 29, 2008
    hehe Disneyland..man I'm so with Naruto on that front. My bf is scared of me at disneyland, and my best friend say's i should be like the childern that wear little blue leashs! lol anyway...i'm going soon and this story just hyped me up even more! hehe your the best for writing about disneyland and making it three times better with sasunaru smut!
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  • From Kool3Ayame on September 28, 2008
    I loooooooooooovvvvvvvveeeeed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I especially loved the bit when Sasuke says Naruto is bueatiful. Made me weep LOL. Good Job!

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2008
    I like how you go back and forth between the past and the present, it's like your signature as an Author, along with your remarkable humor and juicy SasuNaru lemons, what else could i ask for?

    Oh! I forgot to mention your fluffy endings...i LOVE them. I hope you always write stories with fluffy, tender moments as i've learned to eagerly look forward to all of them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2008
    Another amazingly well written story by you. I love everything you write. Each new SasuNaru story you create makes me fall in love with SasuNaru all over again. I like how you go back and forth between the past and the present, it's like your signature as an Author, along with your remarkable humor and juicy SasuNaru lemons, what else could i ask for? You deliver it all and never disappoint your loyal readers.

    I have It's a Small World stuck in my head now but it's okay because now whenever i hear that song, i'll remember your story and i like that :D

    'Later, they would collect the picture that captured the Princess lying on the ground in a lacy heap, having fallen when Sasuke ripped his arm away, Prince Charming cradling his gloved hand against his chest, a pained expression on his face, and Sasuke yanking a red faced, stammering Naruto away from the whole scene'


    That has to be ONE of my favorite parts of the story, although it's really hard to choose a favorite part when the entire story is awesome.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on September 28, 2008
    I loved this from the very beginning!!! You know I did. I love you and everything you write... fluffy or non.
    Slave
    Kisses baby
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  • From Jelp on September 28, 2008
    :D That was very fluffy, but still very hot. You're very talented in that you can blend the two without making it seem forced or out of character! ^_^

    I don't know what else to really say becasue I think I've already told you how awesome and amazing authoress you are (alliteration baby!), but I'll tell you again just in case you've forgotten. You are an awesome and amazing authoress!

    Looking forward to what you post next! ~ Jelp
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