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Reviews for Ordinary

By : ShiranuiV
  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2011
    Read the first chapter a while ago. I'm glad you're back to writing, and hopefully are going to finish it.

    The story has an interesting start, and you shouldn't worry about your writing, looks fine to me (I only caught a couple of mistakes and will be checking your profile to send you the corrections. They are minor so don't get all worried and stuff.)

    Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. You did a very good job. ^__^

    ~MayaNara (who is too lazy to sign-in in order to post a review ^_^;)
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  • From cynaga on June 05, 2011
    Congratulations on your remission~! ♥
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  • From Prism0467 on June 04, 2011
    Congrats on your remission.
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  • From monochrome on March 17, 2011
    I just wanted to say this is a wonderful start to a story, and I hope you're doing well, wherever you are. My grandfather and uncle both are struggling with cancer so I've seen some of what it's like, but I can only imagine what it must be like to actually BE the one diagnosed. I wish you all the happiness and health in the world :) Good luck!
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  • From Prism0467 on February 05, 2009
    I'm praying for your remission. I survived lymphoma in 2004/2005.
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  • From CurtisZidaneZiraa on February 04, 2009
    oh my word. I hope you get better! I love both yours and pen_name's fics (you guys have this medical collaboration, that's a ShikaNeji as well, the one you guys only update when you haven't slept in 36 hours or something - LOVED it). I'm in the medical profession (Nursing) so I like stuff that has actual fact to it, not half urban legend, half rumour. But whoa, seriously, that stinks. Take lots of vitamin C, it'll help boost your immune system (which the chemo is wrecking while attacking the tumour). And don't ignore natural remedies, even if you don't want to trust only them, they can help you at least deal with the side effects of chemo!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2009
    Well this seems like it could turn out to be quite an interesting story!
    I hope you're planning on continuing it.
    Really want too find out what poor Shika is going to go through xD
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  • From TheGingerLady on October 24, 2008
    hahah I'm realy looking forward to the next chapter!! totaly cought my intrest!
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  • From luna2k on October 10, 2008
    nice! hope you update soon :)
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  • From ANON - cantthnk on October 04, 2008
    Good Start. Can't wait for more!
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  • From CurtisZidaneZiraa on September 23, 2008
    looks interesting so far. Did you know that Sept 22 is Shikamaru's birthday? :) Keep writing, I like this!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2008
    Oooh, interesting. So I take it Shika's going to be the ordinary model? Because he has a way of appearing ordinary even though he isn't really XD Plus, Neji's too pretty. Not quite as bad as Haku, but still...XP
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  • From sweetciel on September 23, 2008
    Totally looking forward to the next chapter. I can see that this is going to turn out great!!!
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  • From ANON - pen_name (at work, using shared computer, so not logged on) on September 23, 2008
    YAAAAAAAY!!!! Thank you so so so so much!!! I love it, and I can't wait to see the audition!
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