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Reviews for Constructive Possession

By : Prism0467
  • From Gaia77 on December 11, 2008
    omfg that was hysterical!
    I cannot wait for the next Chapter (gotta love the cliffhangers ..lol)
    I definately look forward to your updates and you never disappoint =)

    and TY for the compliments. I hope you enjoy Neji as much as Shikamaru.
    Hoping to get the full piece up sometime this week =)

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  • From Gaia77 on December 09, 2008
    I must admit when I first saw the summary for Kindred I almost passed it up. Thought that it would be another story with potential that the writer would probably not finish or take forever to update...but alas the Neji/Shika pull was impossible to resist and I'm glad I caved cause I've been hooked ever since.

    I absolutely love how you've portrayed every character in your stories. Your writing is fantastic.

    I've been wanting to draw something in honor of these fantabulous stories for a very long time and FINALLY I'm getting somewhere!
    I wanted to take the time to let you know how much I enjoy reading your stories and continue to look forward to the updates and future fics you may write. I also wanted to share a piece of the drawing I am working on. It's only Shika at the moment but Neji will join him soon enough. I hope you like and feel free to share =)

    http://kyuubi1010.deviantart.com/art/Shika-105898139
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  • From animelovergirl on December 09, 2008
    Oh. My. Fucking. GOD! There I was, gone for four days, not able to go online and not able to look you up for any updates and here I am, back home again and what do I find?! TWO WHOLE CHAPTERS!!! *dances around here room with a maniac gleam in her eyes* And finally we see the beginnings of the dinner party. Hiashi was wonderful as always. Caring, funny, clever and a pervert ^_^
    Oh boy, Neji having the jitters *lol* It's so sweet the way he is so anxious and afraid of rejection from Shikamaru's parents. And then he tries to fuck his anxiety away...and almost succeeds, too ^^ That was so hot! Poor Shikamaru. He's totally at the mercy of his Hyuuga, isn't he? But who can blame him...certainly not me *smirk* Luckily Hiashi intervened or else the Nara's might have been introduced to Neji with his pants around his ankles *evil laughter*. What a way to impress his 'mother and father in law'. Now, as always I'll be sitting right in front of computer to wait for your update! Hopefully real life won't intervene again. Otherwise tell it to shove it ^_^
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  • From jordash00 on December 08, 2008
    The line about Neji needing to F*** away his nerves had me peeing in my pants!
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  • From Twiggies on December 08, 2008
    Hehehe! XD
    Neji in deed was very nervous about meeting Shika's parents!
    Neji should be thabking Hiashi too, for interrupting. Smellinf like cum and other fluids doesn't make a very good first impression in front the Nara's. XDD
    Ahh, all of them, dressed so well, plus tie too.
    Well dressed men are sexy. :D

    Mah, Tenten's baack! XD
    I wonder what that thing was Hiashi had to do so.. secretly..

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From ShikaNejiLover on December 08, 2008
    Awww...Poor Neji! Shika and Hiashi are so mean to him. I guess they had to be. Can't effin' wait for the next chapter! I am really sad that this fic will be ending so soon. I feel like it has become a huge part of my life, I check it everyday and all that. What will I do without it? Cry. jk

    So, is Shika smokin' hot in this chapter or is it just me? Neji too... can't leave his fine ass out!

    Update soon!


    Peace-Love-Yaoi
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  • From CurtisZidaneZiraa on December 07, 2008
    YES! Oh was that funny. Yay, fast updates!!! :D I like those. And Hiashi was as hysterical as always. Now what was he up to? Hmmm...
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  • From 7mizu8 on December 07, 2008
    yess another hot, sexy visualization. this time of shikamaru
    uh-oh tenten's back. i wonder what she still wants
    i'm loving the plot but i have to be honest: I can't wait for more lemons
    i am very much looking forward to the actual dinner party, though ^_^ i want to know what shika's dad is like =3
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2008
    It seems I’m a bit behind, lol that’s ok, gonna have to make up for that!

    Review for chapter 19
    Lol, maybe Neji and Shika should start their own collection, I’m sure neither would mind! Hiashi is creepy, perverted and all that other good stuff, but I love the fact that he does his best to take care of Neji. Wow…Shikamaru seems to bit more possessive and protective of Neji than I thought lol, I wonder if it will come to the point he’ll make Neji wear a collar with his name on it…and the plug with the tail!!!

    Review for chapter 20
    Awww Neji is nervous! It’s ok thought, I mean it’s Neji, how could anyone not love Neji! Lol I just know there are gonna be some awkward moments though before the dinner is done! Hmmm…Neji should show Shikamaru the uses of tie…like tying him to bed the bed!!! LOL Hiashi, he did it on purpose but that was probably a good thing, we couldn’t have those two coming down late to the dinner party, limping and covered in love marks, I don’t think that would be a good first impression for Shika’s parents. Update soon!!!

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  • From Kipling on December 07, 2008
    mwahahahahahahahaa TENTEN. *waves newly-made HiaTen flaglet* And Hiashi being his own, sex-for-my-nephew-destroying self. Oh, too good.
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  • From sangohoushi on December 07, 2008
    lmao!! that last chapter was so funny....neji's such a horn dog...

    i love it... feed my need for neji/shika by updating!!! ^_^
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  • From Kipling on December 07, 2008
    ....okay, it's official, this is my favorite chapter, because of all the lovely hiashi action in it. Mmmm. Hiashi cooking. And I like the insight into the Hyuuga history from Hiashi's point of view too. And I cannot wait until he and the elder Naras meet.....ohboyohboyohboy. *rubs hands together*
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  • From ShikaNejiLover on December 06, 2008
    I completely understand the real-life thing. I work in retail and since it's the holiday season I am always working, and even when I'm not I am sleeping.

    Anyway, great job on this chapter. I love Hiashi!!! I think I say that every time he makes an appearance. You are correct that little talk was way past due. Hiashi is such a perv, I laughed at the end where he was like 'what have you been doing with your mouth Shikamaru?' Hilarious.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Peace-Love-Yaoi
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  • From Twiggies on December 06, 2008
    God, Hiashi just cracks me up. XD
    But it seems he can be serious too. Hehe.
    His and Shikamaru's talk really was good. And interesting.

    ''play-in-my-ass-with-a-horse-dildo-until-I’m-screaming-out-my-orgasm-at-3AM''
    The mental image of that.. Ahh droolnosebleed

    Heh, Can't wait till Shika's parents finally come to the dinner.
    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

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  • From sweetciel on December 02, 2008
    It would be nice if Kabuto wound up with someone. He life sounds pretty sad and desolate. Maybe his canon love, Oro-chan, will swoop in and sweep him off his feet?
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