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Reviews for Ping

By : akatsume1593
  • From FarawayDawn on October 01, 2008
    awesome. utterly awesome. I don't know what more to say. I really don't get left speechless with awe from a killer story often. :D
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  • From Kipling on September 30, 2008
    Have I mentioned this is FRIKKING hot?
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  • From ShouraiChan on September 21, 2008
    ONLY Gai-Sensei, lol. Only him! This was funny! I liked it and the lemon was good too! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Saitochan on September 19, 2008
    Nice! I could totally see this happening (actually, I'd like to see it happening).
    Damn, that's hot. Great story and great writing.
    Any chance Gai can give Tenten more inappropriate gifts?
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  • From roxnroll on September 18, 2008
    That was really HOT!! Keep these coming.
    Rox
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  • From Archfiend on September 18, 2008
    Whoah, very imaginitive and very, very steamy. I could actually picture it. the only problem I have is sthat you stopped before the real lemon scene. You cut it off in the middle. hello? Sacrilege. Add another chapter please!!
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